for Kiss of Twilight: Betrayed by the Dawn8/1/2013 c4 tealseal773
When I saw that the last time you updated this story was in 2011, I freaked out. However, I saw that you edited OSTSG in January, and I thought, "Thank goodness! She's alive!"
I'm new to your series. After my friend introduced me to your stories, I instantly got hooked and read nonstop until I came to the end of this chapter. You REALLY got me addicted; I don't normally stay until 3 A.M., trying to read one more chapter while pretending to sleep when my parents peek in (I'm a highschooler).
It goes without saying, by this point, that your stories a great. Typos DO bug me, but the plot makes me not care about them. Besides, the only stories I've written myself are only in my heart, so who am I to criticize you?
Anyway, I hope you keep writing! Please don't stop writing until you die. That sounds a bit sadistic, but I really hope you do. It will be nice if OSTSG is published, and I can wait if that's what caused this long hiatus. If all your stories become published in the future, I WILL buy all of them! Oh, and one last thing: am I the only one who's NOT obsessed with "Vinny-kin"?
When I saw that the last time you updated this story was in 2011, I freaked out. However, I saw that you edited OSTSG in January, and I thought, "Thank goodness! She's alive!"
I'm new to your series. After my friend introduced me to your stories, I instantly got hooked and read nonstop until I came to the end of this chapter. You REALLY got me addicted; I don't normally stay until 3 A.M., trying to read one more chapter while pretending to sleep when my parents peek in (I'm a highschooler).
It goes without saying, by this point, that your stories a great. Typos DO bug me, but the plot makes me not care about them. Besides, the only stories I've written myself are only in my heart, so who am I to criticize you?
Anyway, I hope you keep writing! Please don't stop writing until you die. That sounds a bit sadistic, but I really hope you do. It will be nice if OSTSG is published, and I can wait if that's what caused this long hiatus. If all your stories become published in the future, I WILL buy all of them! Oh, and one last thing: am I the only one who's NOT obsessed with "Vinny-kin"?
7/31/2013 c4 La Principesa
Hi, this is my first time to comment, but I hope I'm doing this right. I don't know your real name, but Ranting Forever n Rambling On, I'm a really big fan! I've started reading OSTSG a while back, and couldn't put it down. I love the plot, I love the story line, and I love the characters. Your books are really captivating, and addictive. I couldn't put it down once I start reading. When I'm reading your books, I laugh, sigh, blush, and even complain. My workmates even comment that I look like a fool smiling to myself while reading your book. Like I care, you know. lol. I hope you become a Published Author soon, and I'll be looking forward to seeing your name (whatever it really is) on the future Teen Books bestselling list. Good luck, and keep up the good work.
And one more thing, Vinny, as charming as he is, will never put a smile on face like Alexander does. Keep up the Good Work! .
Hi, this is my first time to comment, but I hope I'm doing this right. I don't know your real name, but Ranting Forever n Rambling On, I'm a really big fan! I've started reading OSTSG a while back, and couldn't put it down. I love the plot, I love the story line, and I love the characters. Your books are really captivating, and addictive. I couldn't put it down once I start reading. When I'm reading your books, I laugh, sigh, blush, and even complain. My workmates even comment that I look like a fool smiling to myself while reading your book. Like I care, you know. lol. I hope you become a Published Author soon, and I'll be looking forward to seeing your name (whatever it really is) on the future Teen Books bestselling list. Good luck, and keep up the good work.
And one more thing, Vinny, as charming as he is, will never put a smile on face like Alexander does. Keep up the Good Work! .
7/30/2013 c4 Guest
Um, is this story finish yet? I have read this story so much in the past 3-4 that I have finish OSTSG and almost finish the first story of KoT only a handful of chapters left. A few more thing. I like this story so so SOOO Much and OSTSG as well. You cant simply just stop here. NOOOOOO! NOT HERE! PLEASE CONTINUE! PLEASE! Sorry for that. -cough- well I hate waiting because the suspense are always killing me, not literally though, you understand don't you? This is a story that I am totally obsess with so you can't stop here. If it is finish like this the try to remove the message above from your head if possible. If you are wondering why I put this here instead is because I saw that there are three separate story and the last on is not marked as complete. So I wrote this here instead. Don't worry I hate a story being spoil even though many might have been spoil for me because of other people not likely me. Well sometime but not likely. Please update I will give you 3-7 days because I might be done by then because it is summer vacation only for a month. If not a new chapter by then then I am not sure how miserable I would be. This is my first review of this story and the one before because I keep telling myself later because I was too interested in the story.
*Below message for above
But like I say before if you finish the story already, I don't know because I am not this far yet. Please forget about what I said above*. Thank you!
Also one more thing: What was I going to say? ...oh yeah I remember, wait no I don't ... Oh yeah, you can also contact me on fictionpress by the name of Wishing Upon A Star or was it WhishingUponAStar I don't remember that we'll or maybe A Wish Upon A Shooting Star, don't remember short term memory. Or fanfiction by A Wish Upon A Shooting Star. There was something else I have to say...?... Oh yeah I have never been this obses with a story from fanfiction or fictionpress before now. I am even more or just as much as obsess with this series as the Percy Jackson series ans Heroes of Olympus series and that is saying a lot. Also I know this is too much but if you haven't update or contact me by the end of August or -September I might give up on this story and move on to another but please don't let that happen. Because that would be bad even if I don't give up that easily but this story if from some years ago so if you don't contact me or update to me that would mean that you gave up on fictionpress and this story so why bother waiting even if I won't lose hope, and I do wish to see this story and many other publish. I know I only say one more thing but I have a horrible habit of writing too much or stop too soon. Forgive me for this but I give you until the end of this year, 2013, before I give up on you so use your time wisely. Longest review I had ever written and this is saying a lot more than you think.
FINAL THING, I HOPE: I TOTALLY LOVE THIS WHOLE STORY AND I AM GOING TO FOLLOW AND FAVORITE YOU WHEN I GET THE CHANCE TO. AND YOU SAID IT WILL ONLY TAKE A FEW MINUTES TO REVIEW FOR ME IT TOOK OVER 10 minutes. I know that was two things not one and this makes it three sorry. Oh yeah, you are not the worst artist three ever is I know people who can draw only stick figure, me included. -cough- Also I know that makes four and this makes five, but like I said bad habit.
Um, is this story finish yet? I have read this story so much in the past 3-4 that I have finish OSTSG and almost finish the first story of KoT only a handful of chapters left. A few more thing. I like this story so so SOOO Much and OSTSG as well. You cant simply just stop here. NOOOOOO! NOT HERE! PLEASE CONTINUE! PLEASE! Sorry for that. -cough- well I hate waiting because the suspense are always killing me, not literally though, you understand don't you? This is a story that I am totally obsess with so you can't stop here. If it is finish like this the try to remove the message above from your head if possible. If you are wondering why I put this here instead is because I saw that there are three separate story and the last on is not marked as complete. So I wrote this here instead. Don't worry I hate a story being spoil even though many might have been spoil for me because of other people not likely me. Well sometime but not likely. Please update I will give you 3-7 days because I might be done by then because it is summer vacation only for a month. If not a new chapter by then then I am not sure how miserable I would be. This is my first review of this story and the one before because I keep telling myself later because I was too interested in the story.
*Below message for above
But like I say before if you finish the story already, I don't know because I am not this far yet. Please forget about what I said above*. Thank you!
Also one more thing: What was I going to say? ...oh yeah I remember, wait no I don't ... Oh yeah, you can also contact me on fictionpress by the name of Wishing Upon A Star or was it WhishingUponAStar I don't remember that we'll or maybe A Wish Upon A Shooting Star, don't remember short term memory. Or fanfiction by A Wish Upon A Shooting Star. There was something else I have to say...?... Oh yeah I have never been this obses with a story from fanfiction or fictionpress before now. I am even more or just as much as obsess with this series as the Percy Jackson series ans Heroes of Olympus series and that is saying a lot. Also I know this is too much but if you haven't update or contact me by the end of August or -September I might give up on this story and move on to another but please don't let that happen. Because that would be bad even if I don't give up that easily but this story if from some years ago so if you don't contact me or update to me that would mean that you gave up on fictionpress and this story so why bother waiting even if I won't lose hope, and I do wish to see this story and many other publish. I know I only say one more thing but I have a horrible habit of writing too much or stop too soon. Forgive me for this but I give you until the end of this year, 2013, before I give up on you so use your time wisely. Longest review I had ever written and this is saying a lot more than you think.
FINAL THING, I HOPE: I TOTALLY LOVE THIS WHOLE STORY AND I AM GOING TO FOLLOW AND FAVORITE YOU WHEN I GET THE CHANCE TO. AND YOU SAID IT WILL ONLY TAKE A FEW MINUTES TO REVIEW FOR ME IT TOOK OVER 10 minutes. I know that was two things not one and this makes it three sorry. Oh yeah, you are not the worst artist three ever is I know people who can draw only stick figure, me included. -cough- Also I know that makes four and this makes five, but like I said bad habit.
6/30/2013 c4 Nora
Please continue this story. You've managed to bring these characters to life in such vivid descriptions. This story has everything: An adventure-filled plot, romance, friendship, curses, witches, royalty, and frankly I'm dying to know what'll happen in the end... Js.
Please continue this story. You've managed to bring these characters to life in such vivid descriptions. This story has everything: An adventure-filled plot, romance, friendship, curses, witches, royalty, and frankly I'm dying to know what'll happen in the end... Js.
6/7/2013 c1 Guest
Oh, I hope I'll still live the day you decide to finally update.
Oh, I hope I'll still live the day you decide to finally update.
5/23/2013 c4 Aria Faccia
I recently stumbled across OSTSG and spent the next couple days reading it. I loved it. I saw that that this series was a continuation of it and I got excited. I looked ahead and saw that it hadn't been updated in quite a while but I decided to read and entirely engross myself in it anyway. Now I am at the end, feeling empty, but not regretting my decision whatsoever hahah.
I don't know if you still read the reviews people leave you... but I just wanted to say that your writing and stories are captivating. You create a world that is easy to escape to and get lost in. My mind has been filled with nothing but your characters and I often find myself sketching ... when I get a decent drawing done I will send it to you in hopes of getting an update, maybe even a double one, if your previous deal still stands.
-Volta
I recently stumbled across OSTSG and spent the next couple days reading it. I loved it. I saw that that this series was a continuation of it and I got excited. I looked ahead and saw that it hadn't been updated in quite a while but I decided to read and entirely engross myself in it anyway. Now I am at the end, feeling empty, but not regretting my decision whatsoever hahah.
I don't know if you still read the reviews people leave you... but I just wanted to say that your writing and stories are captivating. You create a world that is easy to escape to and get lost in. My mind has been filled with nothing but your characters and I often find myself sketching ... when I get a decent drawing done I will send it to you in hopes of getting an update, maybe even a double one, if your previous deal still stands.
-Volta
5/9/2013 c1 Guest
I want to cry
I want to cry
5/3/2013 c1 Joey The Apple
I have forgotten, what the only hope I had of you ever updating, felt like...
I have forgotten, what the only hope I had of you ever updating, felt like...
4/27/2013 c4 Katrina
I know its been a while, but I really am hooked on this story! Please finish this story, it would be very wonderful if you did
I know its been a while, but I really am hooked on this story! Please finish this story, it would be very wonderful if you did
4/21/2013 c1 Hera
Uhmmm.. Is there any tini-tiny chance that you'll update? Even in 2013? I BEG YOOOUUUUU!
Uhmmm.. Is there any tini-tiny chance that you'll update? Even in 2013? I BEG YOOOUUUUU!
4/20/2013 c4 Guest
WHY, OH, WHYYY!? WHY MOST YOU TORMENT ME LIKE THIS?! WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED IN TWO YEARS!? OHHHH,,, NOOOOOOO! why?
WHY, OH, WHYYY!? WHY MOST YOU TORMENT ME LIKE THIS?! WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED IN TWO YEARS!? OHHHH,,, NOOOOOOO! why?
4/16/2013 c4 Anon
Hi! Just wanted to let you know there's someone still reading your stories!
In fact, I've been reading it over and over again hoping someday a new chapter will appear... that's how much I like you stories. Thanks for writing them )
Hi! Just wanted to let you know there's someone still reading your stories!
In fact, I've been reading it over and over again hoping someday a new chapter will appear... that's how much I like you stories. Thanks for writing them )
3/31/2013 c4 
5Caitiespace
So I'm new to Fiction Press and decided that I wanted to find out what other people were writing on here, and I ended up finding Or So The Story Goes.
Two days of doing practically nothing else later, and I've caught up to where Kiss of Twilight: Betrayed by the Dawn is up to. And I've been left wanting!
It's been a long time since I've been sucked into any piece of fiction, and I just wanted to let you know what an awesome series of books this is. I've enjoyed writing for a very long time, but I've never been able to write high fantasy as well as you do. I probably never will. If you haven't been picked up by an agent or publishing house yet, then they're idiots.
I know it's been awhile since you've posted any updates to this story, and I know how life/work/relationships can get in the way of writing, but I just wanted to let you know that I'll wait for you!
Thanks for the great series so far. I may just go and reread them and become even more obsessed about them than I am now!
5CaitiespaceSo I'm new to Fiction Press and decided that I wanted to find out what other people were writing on here, and I ended up finding Or So The Story Goes.
Two days of doing practically nothing else later, and I've caught up to where Kiss of Twilight: Betrayed by the Dawn is up to. And I've been left wanting!
It's been a long time since I've been sucked into any piece of fiction, and I just wanted to let you know what an awesome series of books this is. I've enjoyed writing for a very long time, but I've never been able to write high fantasy as well as you do. I probably never will. If you haven't been picked up by an agent or publishing house yet, then they're idiots.
I know it's been awhile since you've posted any updates to this story, and I know how life/work/relationships can get in the way of writing, but I just wanted to let you know that I'll wait for you!
Thanks for the great series so far. I may just go and reread them and become even more obsessed about them than I am now!
3/19/2013 c4 Reader
OMG okay, so let me tell you a story... there was once a girl who waited 7 months for the third book of her favorite series. She is obsessed and criies jusst at the thoughht of a character dying. No, thisis not the seriees,but this is the girl. So, the book JUST came out TODAY and ran into the house to read it, however... instead I put thee book in a gallon ziplock bag and put it on my desk. WHY? Because I was captured by this story. I was on book two wwhen I got home and read everything, up to this point. NEVER EVER have I read a sstory that has gained sso mucch of my attention. Sso here I am, writing you this on my nook, and I hate typing on my nook. All this is just to prove to you how engrossed I am in your story. I could count on one hand how many times I have commented on story out of hundreds that I've read. I aapologize for all the missspells but this series is in my top 3 and you have become my second favorite writer. And I do have hugh standards and sincerely am sorry abot the typos. Please update! Forever yours, your reader.
OMG okay, so let me tell you a story... there was once a girl who waited 7 months for the third book of her favorite series. She is obsessed and criies jusst at the thoughht of a character dying. No, thisis not the seriees,but this is the girl. So, the book JUST came out TODAY and ran into the house to read it, however... instead I put thee book in a gallon ziplock bag and put it on my desk. WHY? Because I was captured by this story. I was on book two wwhen I got home and read everything, up to this point. NEVER EVER have I read a sstory that has gained sso mucch of my attention. Sso here I am, writing you this on my nook, and I hate typing on my nook. All this is just to prove to you how engrossed I am in your story. I could count on one hand how many times I have commented on story out of hundreds that I've read. I aapologize for all the missspells but this series is in my top 3 and you have become my second favorite writer. And I do have hugh standards and sincerely am sorry abot the typos. Please update! Forever yours, your reader.
3/6/2013 c3 kingdomfantasyanime453
Dear Miss Michelle,
I know your story from ficpress, have known it for years now.
I was wondering when you will update, or are you waiting to publish?
Please reply and thank you for your time
Crystal
Dear Miss Michelle,
I know your story from ficpress, have known it for years now.
I was wondering when you will update, or are you waiting to publish?
Please reply and thank you for your time
Crystal