for Kiss of Twilight: Betrayed by the Dawn6/16/2011 c3 Kat
Why must you hurt me by not having this completed? From last week I have read OSTSG and both KoT's happily because they were finished and now it's like Sonic doesn't have Happy Hour anymore. Meaning, I don't know what to do with my life while waiting for you to post more chapters!
But your works are amazing and it's been a while since I've read a story that makes me stay in instead of going out with friends and I think you for that! Update soon so your adoring fans can read more and finish quickly so I don't go freaking crazy!
Thanks :]
Why must you hurt me by not having this completed? From last week I have read OSTSG and both KoT's happily because they were finished and now it's like Sonic doesn't have Happy Hour anymore. Meaning, I don't know what to do with my life while waiting for you to post more chapters!
But your works are amazing and it's been a while since I've read a story that makes me stay in instead of going out with friends and I think you for that! Update soon so your adoring fans can read more and finish quickly so I don't go freaking crazy!
Thanks :]
6/15/2011 c3 PrincessCalissa
You MUSt update! You are killing me! I need to know what's going on! When is the war? And are you going to put it in vin's POV when she is put to sleep? I just can't wait until he comes back into the story! He is my #1 favorite character! Francis is a close second. He's just so FUnnY! Helena is my 3rd fav:) I can so see her making a counter to his bargain! O.0 (*gasps*) what if Eve turns in her life for Helen's child? Nooo! that would be horrific! But amazing at the same time... My older Sis once told me that if your goal was to write 3words a day on a story, then the stuff would just come to you. But take your time^^ if you publish any stories let me know! I love your writing! And just so you know I was too lazy to log in:/ eh, it happens.
You MUSt update! You are killing me! I need to know what's going on! When is the war? And are you going to put it in vin's POV when she is put to sleep? I just can't wait until he comes back into the story! He is my #1 favorite character! Francis is a close second. He's just so FUnnY! Helena is my 3rd fav:) I can so see her making a counter to his bargain! O.0 (*gasps*) what if Eve turns in her life for Helen's child? Nooo! that would be horrific! But amazing at the same time... My older Sis once told me that if your goal was to write 3words a day on a story, then the stuff would just come to you. But take your time^^ if you publish any stories let me know! I love your writing! And just so you know I was too lazy to log in:/ eh, it happens.
4/27/2011 c3 
1MrsHellman
Well, there isn’t too much to say about this except for:
-God damnit, I really wanted to see even more fluffiness between Vinny and Helena, I can’t help it. I just want to see them do something. You know, can’t they just touch and kiss on the forehead and cheek or something? It would be interesting to see Vincent kiss Helena on the cheek before she leaves with Melina. O3o
and
-You really have to make up your mind when she should fall to sleep. At first it was at the end of the first book, then the end of the second book and now it’s already the third book. Hehe.
I’m A Very Curious Person, Smack Me:
a) You know if we’ll see more of you in the future, or have you given up on FP writing? I can see the potential of becoming a potent author so don’t let your talents get wasted. Doesn’t matter if it’s fanfiction writing or original fiction writing, oh bloody hell— just a book in general or whatever, I’d definitely buy it. You sure do have some talents.
b) How’s it going with getting published? I read some of your Q&A’s and found out that you’re trying to get published and it makes me a bit curious as to how things are going. O3o
Also, if you feel that you've got a hard time forming the chapters, feel free to contact me, I work as a beta/muse to several different people on FFN, check by betabio if anything else.
Dream. Live. Breathe. Write. All for fiction.
Cheers.
1MrsHellmanWell, there isn’t too much to say about this except for:
-God damnit, I really wanted to see even more fluffiness between Vinny and Helena, I can’t help it. I just want to see them do something. You know, can’t they just touch and kiss on the forehead and cheek or something? It would be interesting to see Vincent kiss Helena on the cheek before she leaves with Melina. O3o
and
-You really have to make up your mind when she should fall to sleep. At first it was at the end of the first book, then the end of the second book and now it’s already the third book. Hehe.
I’m A Very Curious Person, Smack Me:
a) You know if we’ll see more of you in the future, or have you given up on FP writing? I can see the potential of becoming a potent author so don’t let your talents get wasted. Doesn’t matter if it’s fanfiction writing or original fiction writing, oh bloody hell— just a book in general or whatever, I’d definitely buy it. You sure do have some talents.
b) How’s it going with getting published? I read some of your Q&A’s and found out that you’re trying to get published and it makes me a bit curious as to how things are going. O3o
Also, if you feel that you've got a hard time forming the chapters, feel free to contact me, I work as a beta/muse to several different people on FFN, check by betabio if anything else.
Dream. Live. Breathe. Write. All for fiction.
Cheers.
4/18/2011 c3 Helenor
Oh my god. I hadn't realized that you've updated! I'm very sorry to hear that you've been having troubles before, but I'm happy to hear you have a wonderful new boyfriend!
While reading your newest chapter, I got pretty confused. I think I'm still in shock from the update and my illness is also contributing. I will have to review the other chapters before writing an actual review for this one, so stay tuned!
I'm so happy you're back!
Oh my god. I hadn't realized that you've updated! I'm very sorry to hear that you've been having troubles before, but I'm happy to hear you have a wonderful new boyfriend!
While reading your newest chapter, I got pretty confused. I think I'm still in shock from the update and my illness is also contributing. I will have to review the other chapters before writing an actual review for this one, so stay tuned!
I'm so happy you're back!
4/18/2011 c3 MeanGreenRene
Wow it has been forever and a day. But thank you for the update! I hope you update soon!
Wow it has been forever and a day. But thank you for the update! I hope you update soon!
3/27/2011 c3 Crystal Royale
My goodness, it's been so long I didn't recognize the name FictionPress at first! I'm pleased to see a new chapter for such a fabulous story. Life does indeed suck at times, but I'm glad to see things starting to look up for you, and it's good to see you back writing again.
I really like that we're finally getting some backstory on Melina; it's definitely needed, and it does slightly lessen my dislike of her. I still want to smack Vinny upside the head and tell him to stop being suck an idiot! XD
I'm really interested to see where things go from here, and I'm excited to see what things are like in Zephyr compared to the other kingdoms so far explored.
Good luck to you and happy writing!
~Cryssy
My goodness, it's been so long I didn't recognize the name FictionPress at first! I'm pleased to see a new chapter for such a fabulous story. Life does indeed suck at times, but I'm glad to see things starting to look up for you, and it's good to see you back writing again.
I really like that we're finally getting some backstory on Melina; it's definitely needed, and it does slightly lessen my dislike of her. I still want to smack Vinny upside the head and tell him to stop being suck an idiot! XD
I'm really interested to see where things go from here, and I'm excited to see what things are like in Zephyr compared to the other kingdoms so far explored.
Good luck to you and happy writing!
~Cryssy
3/26/2011 c3 Eisette
Ah, this chapter was great! I'm so glad your life has picked up again too :) And thank you for mentioning me at the end! It made me grin :3
Ah, I wish I could see Vinny's reaction when he realises Helena, Melina and Eve are gone! Call me cruel, but I imagine he'd be so heartbreakingly upset
Ah, this chapter was great! I'm so glad your life has picked up again too :) And thank you for mentioning me at the end! It made me grin :3
Ah, I wish I could see Vinny's reaction when he realises Helena, Melina and Eve are gone! Call me cruel, but I imagine he'd be so heartbreakingly upset
3/26/2011 c3 2manda rose
Such a good chapter! It was nice to learn the whole (if brief) tale of Melina's past. Well, maybe not the whole tale, but at least the beginning haha. For some reason, I like Melina. She's scary and selfish, but she makes me wonder.
Anyway, update soon! I can't wait to read more about Helena, and her story has almost reached its end! Unless, of course, this book winds up becoming longer than planned and there's a fourth...
:)
2manda roseSuch a good chapter! It was nice to learn the whole (if brief) tale of Melina's past. Well, maybe not the whole tale, but at least the beginning haha. For some reason, I like Melina. She's scary and selfish, but she makes me wonder.
Anyway, update soon! I can't wait to read more about Helena, and her story has almost reached its end! Unless, of course, this book winds up becoming longer than planned and there's a fourth...
:)
3/25/2011 c3 1Xanthe P
Oh! I'm so sorry about all the bad stuff that happened to you. :(
But I'm glad you have a new boyfriend now! I wish you all the best. :)
YAY for an update! I've missed this story a lot. I hope for more soon! Keep on being an amazing author, okay? :D
1Xanthe POh! I'm so sorry about all the bad stuff that happened to you. :(
But I'm glad you have a new boyfriend now! I wish you all the best. :)
YAY for an update! I've missed this story a lot. I hope for more soon! Keep on being an amazing author, okay? :D
3/25/2011 c3 1MellyMeliza
You're back!
When I saw the update in my email I thought it was going to say you were going to stop writing Kiss of Twilight.
Surprise, surprise!
A good one too.
Good chapter, glad you're back, and sorry for the bad things that happened.
1MellyMelizaYou're back!
When I saw the update in my email I thought it was going to say you were going to stop writing Kiss of Twilight.
Surprise, surprise!
A good one too.
Good chapter, glad you're back, and sorry for the bad things that happened.
3/25/2011 c3 1SourTofu
Am I dreaming? *rubs eyes* but the alert for a KOT update is still here! *clicks link* And, and, there's Helena and Eve and Melina and Vinny...*faints from shock*
o
But no really, it's great to have you back! this series is still one of my top five and i can't wait for the final installment. even if it does take five more years to finish...:p
also, sorry that you've had such a sucky year. but it sounds like thing are coming around for you (at least with the super sweet new boyfriend;) so that's good too!
and don't worry about the long update i understand (i think my FF readers are ready to kill me. i haven't updated since last summer...i should get on that...)
lotsoflove
SourTofu
1SourTofuAm I dreaming? *rubs eyes* but the alert for a KOT update is still here! *clicks link* And, and, there's Helena and Eve and Melina and Vinny...*faints from shock*
o
But no really, it's great to have you back! this series is still one of my top five and i can't wait for the final installment. even if it does take five more years to finish...:p
also, sorry that you've had such a sucky year. but it sounds like thing are coming around for you (at least with the super sweet new boyfriend;) so that's good too!
and don't worry about the long update i understand (i think my FF readers are ready to kill me. i haven't updated since last summer...i should get on that...)
lotsoflove
SourTofu
3/25/2011 c3 AngelGarnet
I'm so glad you've updated again! I've been checking around every so often to see if you've put anything up (even though I get chapters sent to my e-mail haha)
I'm glad that you have a lovely boyfriend now : D
Even if everything seems down, you have to remember that then, things can only go up, and eventually, everything rights itself again.
I hope you write some more soon!
how is trying to get published going?
I'm so glad you've updated again! I've been checking around every so often to see if you've put anything up (even though I get chapters sent to my e-mail haha)
I'm glad that you have a lovely boyfriend now : D
Even if everything seems down, you have to remember that then, things can only go up, and eventually, everything rights itself again.
I hope you write some more soon!
how is trying to get published going?
3/24/2011 c3 3Ivymax1234
Thank you so much for updating! I've been looking forward to an update. And now that it's up... I find that I've forgotten most of this story. So, now I must ask myself, should I reread? Nah, I won't. Maybe someday... when bunnies fly and I finally update myself! =D
Anyway, I loved the chapter, and I was wondering if the whole thing with the "one drawing=one update" was still going. If not, that's great too... (my drawing of Helena was by no means good... *shudder*)
I hope you do finish by the time you start school again, and if not... Well, never mind.
Thanks again for updating!
-.-.-Ivymax
3Ivymax1234Thank you so much for updating! I've been looking forward to an update. And now that it's up... I find that I've forgotten most of this story. So, now I must ask myself, should I reread? Nah, I won't. Maybe someday... when bunnies fly and I finally update myself! =D
Anyway, I loved the chapter, and I was wondering if the whole thing with the "one drawing=one update" was still going. If not, that's great too... (my drawing of Helena was by no means good... *shudder*)
I hope you do finish by the time you start school again, and if not... Well, never mind.
Thanks again for updating!
-.-.-Ivymax
3/23/2011 c3 redambrosia
Yay! You're Back! Finaly Helena realized who the big bad witch is! I seriously wanted to jump into the story and scream it at her! Anyways, great start so please update sooner!
Yay! You're Back! Finaly Helena realized who the big bad witch is! I seriously wanted to jump into the story and scream it at her! Anyways, great start so please update sooner!
3/23/2011 c3 LondonLi
Wow, life's been a rollercoaster for you lately, hasn't it? I'm glad it's on an upswing! Thanks so much for the update; you sure left us in one heck of a cliffie last time!
Wow, life's been a rollercoaster for you lately, hasn't it? I'm glad it's on an upswing! Thanks so much for the update; you sure left us in one heck of a cliffie last time!