for Goal!11/3/2009 c5 Feeding Ground
OH dear! Those two always seem to be arguing with each other! I really enjoyed this chapter as it seemed to have a lot of interaction between Jerome and Ilse.
Do you have any idea how long you are planning on making this story?
Keep up the good work!
OH dear! Those two always seem to be arguing with each other! I really enjoyed this chapter as it seemed to have a lot of interaction between Jerome and Ilse.
Do you have any idea how long you are planning on making this story?
Keep up the good work!
11/2/2009 c4 twilight24
aw, he seems like a good guy even through all those blank faces and sarcasm. And it seems like he might just be a tad bit interested in her judging by how he was staring at her and avoided her gaze in the end. and nina seems like she has more depth then she puts on. she sounds like she could be a good friend
aw, he seems like a good guy even through all those blank faces and sarcasm. And it seems like he might just be a tad bit interested in her judging by how he was staring at her and avoided her gaze in the end. and nina seems like she has more depth then she puts on. she sounds like she could be a good friend
11/2/2009 c4 Erin
Loved it. Just read all 4 chapters. Update soon:)
Loved it. Just read all 4 chapters. Update soon:)
10/31/2009 c3 sonia
I'm loving the story - please continue to update..fast! :)
I'm loving the story - please continue to update..fast! :)
10/30/2009 c3 Clara
This story is so funny and good! I love soccer and it's great to see a fp story centered around it. LOVE IT!
This story is so funny and good! I love soccer and it's great to see a fp story centered around it. LOVE IT!
10/30/2009 c3 twilight24
haha, wow...I cant believe he heard all that and still managed not to act all pissed at Isle! I seriously would've die from the embarressment! or at least hyperventilated
haha, wow...I cant believe he heard all that and still managed not to act all pissed at Isle! I seriously would've die from the embarressment! or at least hyperventilated
10/30/2009 c3 Feeding Ground
Hahaha - Dupont's last line was fantastic!
I came across a couple of errors, such as missing words, but nothing major.
The story continues to read very well and is developing nicely.
I can't help but cringe each time something happens to Ilse. She doesn't seem to be having much luck!
The speed that you are posting these chapters are phenomenal. Keep up the excellent work and can't wait to read the next chapter!
Hahaha - Dupont's last line was fantastic!
I came across a couple of errors, such as missing words, but nothing major.
The story continues to read very well and is developing nicely.
I can't help but cringe each time something happens to Ilse. She doesn't seem to be having much luck!
The speed that you are posting these chapters are phenomenal. Keep up the excellent work and can't wait to read the next chapter!
10/29/2009 c2 Feeding Ground
Whoopsie! Haha poor, poor Ilse. Brilliant story idea. The plot is very engaging and your writing technique makes it a very enjoyable read. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!
Whoopsie! Haha poor, poor Ilse. Brilliant story idea. The plot is very engaging and your writing technique makes it a very enjoyable read. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!
10/28/2009 c1 ANewDayWillCome
Lol. This was a hilarious first chapter. I like how you wrote about something thats realistic. There are men out there who care about sports more than they care about thier wives or girlfriends. Great writing and kick ass plot!
Lol. This was a hilarious first chapter. I like how you wrote about something thats realistic. There are men out there who care about sports more than they care about thier wives or girlfriends. Great writing and kick ass plot!
10/28/2009 c1 
3St. Clair
Oh poor Ilse. Hating the beautiful game so much only to be thrust back into it because of her job! I definitely feel sorry for Ilse, especially because her friends seem to completely blank her reasons for disliking the new assignment she's been given. Oh, and Jerome Dupont is such a wonderful name. Can't wait to read more !
3St. ClairOh poor Ilse. Hating the beautiful game so much only to be thrust back into it because of her job! I definitely feel sorry for Ilse, especially because her friends seem to completely blank her reasons for disliking the new assignment she's been given. Oh, and Jerome Dupont is such a wonderful name. Can't wait to read more !
10/28/2009 c1 12Miss Mysteries
Great start to the story. Interesting way to start with it and introduction to the character/s.
12Miss MysteriesGreat start to the story. Interesting way to start with it and introduction to the character/s.