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9/7/2015 c7 MalexisSwerve
OH MY LAWD! THIS WAS PERFECTION! So glad I stumbled across this.

Update soon, I'll be refreshing ;)
1/18/2015 c6 2treesnail
I really really love this story! I love the characters and the dialogue and the movement of it all! and I really hope you continue! because I'll be super sad if you don't!
ps, if you need someone to edit in order to make things easier, let me know! I love writing, and I wouldn't mind helping out!
2/14/2010 c5 auel
I do realize that there are sudden abrupt POV changes. I don't know if this is intentional.

But the story is in First Person (Jack's POV) and then suddenly there's a "Jack Interjects". Which severely messed up the flow.

Just do keep that in mind, other than that, hope to see more frequent updates! Keep it up :)
2/13/2010 c5 23plumblossom
The dialog is not confusing at all in this chapter. It's always clear swho's speaking, and I never had to think about what was going on.

If you're wanting to strive for edver more perfection and transparency, I'd use a few more plain "saids," but it's not necessary - I didn't notice how very active the dialog was until I looked back over it following your author's note request.

In other words, you're doing fine.
1/17/2010 c4 12eafggdsg
I love chapter 4! :D This Liam intruiges me. I wonder who he is... I love Jack and Taylor. They make me laugh. "The silent grapeline" Lol! xD Anyway update soon. I can't wait for chapter 5! :D
1/9/2010 c4 awesomeking
Im so glad you reviewed and it seems to me that the plot is developing. But, because of the lack of... um details, it gets a little confusing with the dialogue. Now its awesome that you updated
1/9/2010 c4 AnnaG.Luv
I've waited FAR longer than a month for an update on a story. I still have ones in my favorites that haven't been touched since 2007! Haha man that's sad.
1/9/2010 c4 2CrazyWriter77
Yay! Update, thank you ^^. I really like this story, hope you won't drop it.
1/8/2010 c3 12eafggdsg
Great story so far. I love the interactions between the two main characters. Liam seems like he will be an interesting addition to the story. I must say that I love how Jack speaks. xD Anyway, I really hope you continue this. Keep up the good work and update soon. :D
12/27/2009 c3 2littlemischief
Great story, I love it. See you soon on next chapter: ) x
11/15/2009 c3 2CrazyWriter77
Seriously a good read, i like it so far. Hopefully you'll update soon ^^, one of my favorites.
11/9/2009 c3 4overlordpotatoe
This is really cute! I shall look forward to reading more.
11/9/2009 c3 5Antilus
Aww, I absolutely love these two. They play so well off each other. Keep it up :)
10/31/2009 c3 Jess
Aw talyor is gay
10/31/2009 c3 1Rebel 0ne
Good update! Anxious to hear more about Liam although I can already tell that I'm not going to like him. Anyone that might come between Taylor & Jack is no good in my book.
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