for One of the Guys8/2/2018 c10 Guest
I absolutely loved it!
I absolutely loved it!
8/8/2013 c10 
2BurstofPassion
This is the best 'falling for your best friend' story I have ever read—and believe me, I get a lot of those. It's so funny.I was laughing so hard while trying not to 'cause my lil cousin's napping in my room, but even with that, I laughed frequently.
2BurstofPassionThis is the best 'falling for your best friend' story I have ever read—and believe me, I get a lot of those. It's so funny.I was laughing so hard while trying not to 'cause my lil cousin's napping in my room, but even with that, I laughed frequently.
8/14/2012 c10 2loveofallthatisawesome
Hi! You've written such a wonderful story and I really enjoyed reading it. I loved Jack, Sienna, Anna, Caleb, Alex, Marco and Will - they were all awesome characters.
But I guess I had only one problem - and that's that Sienna doesn't have any. She's perfect. She's captain of the basketball team, she's adored by a ton of guys, she's pretty, has a perfect body, is respected by everyone, and is likable to everyone. She just seems too perfect. The same goes with all the characters actually, except Anna and Marco (they definitely have their defects).
But yeah. This was a great story and I loved it a ton, but maybe next time you should make your characters have some type of defect, so they don't seem so Mary Sue-ish.
2loveofallthatisawesomeHi! You've written such a wonderful story and I really enjoyed reading it. I loved Jack, Sienna, Anna, Caleb, Alex, Marco and Will - they were all awesome characters.
But I guess I had only one problem - and that's that Sienna doesn't have any. She's perfect. She's captain of the basketball team, she's adored by a ton of guys, she's pretty, has a perfect body, is respected by everyone, and is likable to everyone. She just seems too perfect. The same goes with all the characters actually, except Anna and Marco (they definitely have their defects).
But yeah. This was a great story and I loved it a ton, but maybe next time you should make your characters have some type of defect, so they don't seem so Mary Sue-ish.
7/24/2012 c1 5bfungus
It'd be interesting to see how Caleb and Anna got together too (: But this was an awesome story! Loved it (:
5bfungusIt'd be interesting to see how Caleb and Anna got together too (: But this was an awesome story! Loved it (:
1/2/2012 c10 Nothing But A Dreamer
Honey! I totally feeling like BFF to you. I'm sorry if I'm acting like this but I just finished another of your creations! It was SO great. You're such a good writer that I love every moment reading one of your stories. This one is so beautiful. I felt so high right now. I really really really love it! Thank you for writing this, thank you for posting this...
Honey! I totally feeling like BFF to you. I'm sorry if I'm acting like this but I just finished another of your creations! It was SO great. You're such a good writer that I love every moment reading one of your stories. This one is so beautiful. I felt so high right now. I really really really love it! Thank you for writing this, thank you for posting this...
6/2/2011 c10 Nicole
Wow! I really loved this story! It was so cute how they started to like one another and when they got jealous too! I will have to check out more of your stories because this one was one of my favorites!
Wow! I really loved this story! It was so cute how they started to like one another and when they got jealous too! I will have to check out more of your stories because this one was one of my favorites!
5/20/2011 c10 3littlefeatherflying
Awww, I liked it. Chapter 9 was probably my favorite. Good story. Thanks for sharing! NDN
3littlefeatherflyingAwww, I liked it. Chapter 9 was probably my favorite. Good story. Thanks for sharing! NDN
5/20/2011 c8 littlefeatherflying
Gahhh! I'm feeling the tension. I want to know when it ends! And not so much ends but gets resolved. :)
Gahhh! I'm feeling the tension. I want to know when it ends! And not so much ends but gets resolved. :)