for Your Stranger Etiquette11/10/2009 c1 in the city of neon and chrome
wow.
i really liked the sarcastic-ironic way you wrote this piece; your inner voice is incredibly interesting. :P
you should write more essay-narratives like this. i'm interested to read more by you. :)
peace,
red.
wow.
i really liked the sarcastic-ironic way you wrote this piece; your inner voice is incredibly interesting. :P
you should write more essay-narratives like this. i'm interested to read more by you. :)
peace,
red.
11/10/2009 c1 
7Viscera Renejade
So I came across this dot of fun filled syllables... :)
I see you prefer to paint a whole picture for someone. And I find that gratifying. Then you take the reader headfirst into the deeper waters. I enjoy the thought you put into writing this piece, everything from the failing economy to the nefarious uses of poison o.O
Comparing the prices of hospital care paid by taxes and the cost of poison caused an unrelenting chuckle from the depths of my belly.
Haha... anyway...
You ever thought of a career in Environmental Health and Safety? lol.
See, the descriptions of the hazards sound so much like someone who has a checklist and is jotting down any and all things that could be a dangerous endeavour on this, The Eve of the dead.
Sorryshards, you did well and it all makes sense... strangely.
V.
7Viscera RenejadeSo I came across this dot of fun filled syllables... :)
I see you prefer to paint a whole picture for someone. And I find that gratifying. Then you take the reader headfirst into the deeper waters. I enjoy the thought you put into writing this piece, everything from the failing economy to the nefarious uses of poison o.O
Comparing the prices of hospital care paid by taxes and the cost of poison caused an unrelenting chuckle from the depths of my belly.
Haha... anyway...
You ever thought of a career in Environmental Health and Safety? lol.
See, the descriptions of the hazards sound so much like someone who has a checklist and is jotting down any and all things that could be a dangerous endeavour on this, The Eve of the dead.
Sorryshards, you did well and it all makes sense... strangely.
V.