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3/24/2013 c1 27absentmindedprofessor
Interesting take on the obsessive-person stereotype. A Bishop! I think that's what made this story fascinating; that you used a member of the church as the unhinged character.

I feel bad for the Adams family for having to deal with that sort of craziness. From the way Cornel was behaving, it seemed as if he was a big fish in a little pond, looking to control everything and be the leader of his own little coven. Creepy.

Well-written and engaging. I liked this. :D

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