for The Kiss of Death11/3/2009 c1 LaLa
I really liked this, it was very interesting. You write very well and I was engaged throughout the whole story. I think this could make for an excellent longer story. I am very interested in his backstory. I also thought it was very cute and I love the happy ending despite the tragedy.
I really liked this, it was very interesting. You write very well and I was engaged throughout the whole story. I think this could make for an excellent longer story. I am very interested in his backstory. I also thought it was very cute and I love the happy ending despite the tragedy.
11/3/2009 c1 
4aryagal
hey.
wow. this is not my style.
but surprisingly, i love it. haha.
i love the way you described jason's mourning.
and how you wrote death's and blaine's conversations.
the kissing scene in the end was amazing.
although im not crazy about ice cold lips. :P
anyways, keep writing!
peace.
aryagal
4aryagalhey.
wow. this is not my style.
but surprisingly, i love it. haha.
i love the way you described jason's mourning.
and how you wrote death's and blaine's conversations.
the kissing scene in the end was amazing.
although im not crazy about ice cold lips. :P
anyways, keep writing!
peace.
aryagal
11/2/2009 c1 14Sapphyre Nymph
i love it!
though some part of me expected her to be with Jason!
gah.. anyway, i loved it!
14Sapphyre Nymphi love it!
though some part of me expected her to be with Jason!
gah.. anyway, i loved it!
11/2/2009 c1 Writer dreamber
...Note to self...Never drink when driving...got it XD
cute story! you should re make another! =3
...Note to self...Never drink when driving...got it XD
cute story! you should re make another! =3
11/2/2009 c1 2Goddess of Sarcasm
this is just amazing. It justifys the importance of love and is cute! lOVE IT!
2Goddess of Sarcasmthis is just amazing. It justifys the importance of love and is cute! lOVE IT!