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11/13/2010 c1 WishBlade
Sweet and simple =] This was really quite adorable.
1/3/2010 c1 34Ashlee Pond
This is a really sweet story. I love this style, it's always a nice way to read a one-shot.

The only thing that got me was the idea of wearing the jacket down the aisle.. I know it fit in with the story really well, but it was just such a funny picture.

But this is such a nice piece, sweet and romantic and nice to read. You did a fantastic job and I'll definitely be checking more to read more of your one-shots.
12/29/2009 c1 6stranger with your doorkey
this was really cute! :) the ending - wearing it down the aisle - a bit much, but the rest of it was fabulous. i loved the second person point of view and the description of "him"...especially how you could tell how he was feeling by the way that he was wearing it. very creative!
11/8/2009 c1 ForgottenTales
This was so sweet. :D
11/6/2009 c1 14Sapphyre Nymph
that was very nice...

i really liked it!
11/4/2009 c1 26pinkguppie
I loved it!

Very cute and your writing was amazing - your use of desciptions (not too much but not too little) and repetition made me jealous. Fantastic work :)

Gup
11/3/2009 c1 14Renana
Aww this is cute! I love how your writing is descriptive but not so cheesy. I love the boy.

Renana
11/3/2009 c1 2livelaughlove3
love it!

definatly continue with this writing style

its a cute story :D
11/3/2009 c1 1Lady Quixote
that's just cute, and you pulled off the trickiest POV very nicely!

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