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6/4/2001 c1 1bm-exile
How about f*ck the guy below me, huh, Latta? You do need quite a bit of help with your paragraphs, spelling, and grammer, but I can help you with that over the summer, whether you're grounded or not! Well, it was a fun idea and, hell, if you rewrite it after some help from me and Microsoft Words 95, it'll turn out pretty good... Kai *^^*
5/6/2001 c1 R.D.W
Decent idea for a story, but this was not written very well. Seems simple, and if you want my honest opinion, I think an 8 year old could write better. But still...decent idea. Keep improving your writing, and someday make this an easier story to read.

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