for I Wish I Was Your Favourite Girl11/20/2009 c11 
5Chanda Bynum
BEKKI-SAN!
You are NOT my favorite person right now! WHY!
Not JAY!
Alice is so upset. And to think he could've got in the accident because of everything that was on his mind with Alice and Gem and stuff. She must feel horrible.
Can't wait till the next chapter! Keep Writing!
- KyJo60
5Chanda BynumBEKKI-SAN!
You are NOT my favorite person right now! WHY!
Not JAY!
Alice is so upset. And to think he could've got in the accident because of everything that was on his mind with Alice and Gem and stuff. She must feel horrible.
Can't wait till the next chapter! Keep Writing!
- KyJo60
11/19/2009 c11 RK96
aw:( i hope his ok!
i really liked this chapter...it mad more drama and was more emotional :D
man i hope he gets with her and dumps that gem girl lol..i really hate her, i mean if she really cared 4 him wudnt she be there? lol srry im just getting so caught up in the story haha anywyas aweseom wrk so far cant wait 4 ur nxt chapter!
aw:( i hope his ok!
i really liked this chapter...it mad more drama and was more emotional :D
man i hope he gets with her and dumps that gem girl lol..i really hate her, i mean if she really cared 4 him wudnt she be there? lol srry im just getting so caught up in the story haha anywyas aweseom wrk so far cant wait 4 ur nxt chapter!
11/19/2009 c11 InsideMyRainbowEyes
Your horrible you ass! Good thing Gem isn't there I would die! I love Alice and Jay together and it looks like Lance is really coming around. Update soon! Please! =D
Your horrible you ass! Good thing Gem isn't there I would die! I love Alice and Jay together and it looks like Lance is really coming around. Update soon! Please! =D
11/19/2009 c11 1moonlitmidnight
wow...that was an unexpected twist... and i didn't know that being hit by a motorcycle could be fatal... lol... n e ways, I hope he wakes up! He's too sexy to die...
please let him wake up and profess his eternal love for Alice... that would make my day..
k.. keep writin!
1moonlitmidnightwow...that was an unexpected twist... and i didn't know that being hit by a motorcycle could be fatal... lol... n e ways, I hope he wakes up! He's too sexy to die...
please let him wake up and profess his eternal love for Alice... that would make my day..
k.. keep writin!
11/18/2009 c10 InsideMyRainbowEyes
oh...I FRICKEN LOVED THIS CHAPTER! Finally they kissed, do you know how much I have been waiting for that but stupid gem had to ruin it again! Aaron cracks me up, seriously! He is so cute! Update soon! Please! =D
oh...I FRICKEN LOVED THIS CHAPTER! Finally they kissed, do you know how much I have been waiting for that but stupid gem had to ruin it again! Aaron cracks me up, seriously! He is so cute! Update soon! Please! =D
11/18/2009 c10 Mel
I love your story, mate! Fantastic.
I love your story, mate! Fantastic.
11/18/2009 c10 1Lildreamer's handguide
I LOVEIT! I think jay is the idiot here. Why did he work so hard for that?
1Lildreamer's handguideI LOVEIT! I think jay is the idiot here. Why did he work so hard for that?
11/17/2009 c10 5Devoted reader 12
lol i just read all 10 chapters and this HAPPENED to be the last (and my favorite) Chapter! i love this story, and you can count on me to reveiw evry time!
5Devoted reader 12lol i just read all 10 chapters and this HAPPENED to be the last (and my favorite) Chapter! i love this story, and you can count on me to reveiw evry time!
11/17/2009 c10 laughstilithurts
Wow, Jay, will it be Gem or Alice?
Wow, Jay, will it be Gem or Alice?
11/17/2009 c10 6Collins-A
I ab-so-lute-ly LOVE this story. especially this chapter 'cos they finally kissed ;)
I was listening to Alicia Keys "Try sleeping with a broken heart" while reading this, and the it went really well with this chapter. more specifically the Hide n Seek part to where she leaves Jay to decide.
don't let the name of the song fool you though, the lyrics arent sad. =D
6Collins-AI ab-so-lute-ly LOVE this story. especially this chapter 'cos they finally kissed ;)
I was listening to Alicia Keys "Try sleeping with a broken heart" while reading this, and the it went really well with this chapter. more specifically the Hide n Seek part to where she leaves Jay to decide.
don't let the name of the song fool you though, the lyrics arent sad. =D
11/16/2009 c9 4MaPluie
At the beginning, I wanted it to be Lance and Alice. But, now, I'm starting to warm up about Jay. Hehe. We'll see what happens on the next chapters. :p
4MaPluieAt the beginning, I wanted it to be Lance and Alice. But, now, I'm starting to warm up about Jay. Hehe. We'll see what happens on the next chapters. :p
11/16/2009 c9 InsideMyRainbowEyes
hey, Kiristen used the kneedle in the video remember she almost died! Excpet they put it in her stomch instead. lol! Good job...I feel like things are really heating up between Jay and Alice and I can't wait till the next chapter! Update soon, please! =D
hey, Kiristen used the kneedle in the video remember she almost died! Excpet they put it in her stomch instead. lol! Good job...I feel like things are really heating up between Jay and Alice and I can't wait till the next chapter! Update soon, please! =D