for I Wish I Was Your Favourite Girl11/16/2009 c9 
5starbance
i love this story, i really hope Alice doesn't become like a whore and try to get with Jay while he still has a girlfriend, that is so weak but realistic. anywho can't wait for the next update :)
5starbancei love this story, i really hope Alice doesn't become like a whore and try to get with Jay while he still has a girlfriend, that is so weak but realistic. anywho can't wait for the next update :)
11/16/2009 c8 1Lildreamer's handguide
I LOVE IT!
Is chapter nine done?
My grandfather was diabetic too. They had to saw his leg off. After that I practically entertained him with my music and stuff. My dad said I would probably end up like him because of my love of sweets.
I adore it but I think Jay is quite mean.
Poor Alice.
Aaron and Dom is adorable!
What the hell died in Gem's ass?
I dont think much about Lance.
PLEASE UPDATE!
1Lildreamer's handguideI LOVE IT!
Is chapter nine done?
My grandfather was diabetic too. They had to saw his leg off. After that I practically entertained him with my music and stuff. My dad said I would probably end up like him because of my love of sweets.
I adore it but I think Jay is quite mean.
Poor Alice.
Aaron and Dom is adorable!
What the hell died in Gem's ass?
I dont think much about Lance.
PLEASE UPDATE!
11/15/2009 c8 1moonlitmidnight
I liked it! That was scary but I'm glad he was there to help her!
n e ways... gem is pissing me off...she needs to vanish... lol... but seriously... she's ignorant and selfish..
and i hope there isn't anything wrong with alice's arm!
k... update soon!
1moonlitmidnightI liked it! That was scary but I'm glad he was there to help her!
n e ways... gem is pissing me off...she needs to vanish... lol... but seriously... she's ignorant and selfish..
and i hope there isn't anything wrong with alice's arm!
k... update soon!
11/15/2009 c8 InsideMyRainbowEyes
Oh...I hate Gem she ticks me off. I feel so bad about Alice I thought she was having one of those episodes that Kristen Stweard had in Panic Room. That would have been interesting. Okay I really liked this chapter and add more soon please! :D
Oh...I hate Gem she ticks me off. I feel so bad about Alice I thought she was having one of those episodes that Kristen Stweard had in Panic Room. That would have been interesting. Okay I really liked this chapter and add more soon please! :D
11/13/2009 c7 RK96
omg! awesome chapter!:D im so sad it ended:(
Cant wait to read the rest:D..wonder wat her mums gonna say?
omg! awesome chapter!:D im so sad it ended:(
Cant wait to read the rest:D..wonder wat her mums gonna say?
11/13/2009 c7 4MaPluie
Eek, I'm curios to know who helped Alice up. I have a feeling that it's Lance. ;)
4MaPluieEek, I'm curios to know who helped Alice up. I have a feeling that it's Lance. ;)
11/13/2009 c7 InsideMyRainbowEyes
OMG! What happened to dearest Alice! I just lvoe this story and the plot line. I can't wait to see how it turns out! YAY! Add more soon!
OMG! What happened to dearest Alice! I just lvoe this story and the plot line. I can't wait to see how it turns out! YAY! Add more soon!
11/13/2009 c7 5BoxedxxxInnocence
hey, i really, really like your story :) and believe me, there not many stories on fictionpress i could say that about.
gosh, that sounded stuck-up. i didn't mean it that way!
i hope you continue this story for ages and ages - it's really cute! and it's actually well-written - that was actually the first clue (that i picked up on) that said you're english. wait - you are, aren't you?
anyway, happy writing! i'm certainly enjoying it!
bxc
5BoxedxxxInnocencehey, i really, really like your story :) and believe me, there not many stories on fictionpress i could say that about.
gosh, that sounded stuck-up. i didn't mean it that way!
i hope you continue this story for ages and ages - it's really cute! and it's actually well-written - that was actually the first clue (that i picked up on) that said you're english. wait - you are, aren't you?
anyway, happy writing! i'm certainly enjoying it!
bxc
11/12/2009 c6 moonlitmidnight
buwahahahahaha! I loved it! They should have more secret not so date dates... take that Gem you filthy murderer of love!
Lol...
k... update soon!
buwahahahahaha! I loved it! They should have more secret not so date dates... take that Gem you filthy murderer of love!
Lol...
k... update soon!
11/12/2009 c6 RK96
I've been reading ur story and urs is totlaly on my alert:D lol
i think its gud and the other reviews are right it is quite realistic which i like. I also really like Alices character..although i have a feeling there still more to noe bout jay lol...i cant wait to find out more:D
luved it and cant wait 4 the nxt chapter
I've been reading ur story and urs is totlaly on my alert:D lol
i think its gud and the other reviews are right it is quite realistic which i like. I also really like Alices character..although i have a feeling there still more to noe bout jay lol...i cant wait to find out more:D
luved it and cant wait 4 the nxt chapter