Reviews: Her Guardian Angel

12/21/2011 c1

6trippy.cat.girl
That is so sad! But nicely written =)

5/24/2010 c1 eiyuang999
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11/9/2009 c1 misery sister
Oh man! What an awesome beginning! At first I was wondering who he was in the beginning - but then the ending line was like a huge BANG! to end the entire thing. :D AWesomez!

11/6/2009 c1

2xLogan
Nice short story. You can almost feel the emotions of the characters. 7/10 stars.

11/5/2009 c1

82steffxnie
Oh, this is good!

Nice descriptions, and you expressed the emotions well.

I like how there's no quotation marks.

(It should be 'someone shouted' by the way.)

The short sentences are also good. They are simple yet effective.

I really enjoyed this. Good job! ;)