for there's so much less to say2/16/2010 c1 
23thinking.about.thinking
I love these lines:
"so I feed the words I’d give you
to letters and the internet."
thinking.about.thinking
23thinking.about.thinkingI love these lines:
"so I feed the words I’d give you
to letters and the internet."
thinking.about.thinking
11/14/2009 c1 102Midnight In Eden
Simple and brutal. I can definitely empathise with the sentiments here. One thing though, perhaps use an ellipsis at the end of the second stanza? It feels like it should trail off and that would be a good indication of such.
Oh and do you mean "your" on the first line of the second stanza?
Nicely done though.
Midnight
102Midnight In EdenSimple and brutal. I can definitely empathise with the sentiments here. One thing though, perhaps use an ellipsis at the end of the second stanza? It feels like it should trail off and that would be a good indication of such.
Oh and do you mean "your" on the first line of the second stanza?
Nicely done though.
Midnight