for Celestia of the Thorns11/21/2010 c13 
2renegade01
you're a very strong person. and that quote is incredibly sweet. ;)
great chapter as always. the dream bit was cleverly done. can't wait for more. ;)
2renegade01you're a very strong person. and that quote is incredibly sweet. ;)
great chapter as always. the dream bit was cleverly done. can't wait for more. ;)
11/21/2010 c13 6IfWeWereInLove
First things first :P
Brill chapter. Amazingly interesting, as usually but you added some more elements of mystery and fantasy. ;)
Nice ending, it ends with Celeste slightly confused with her feelings about Shaul, and the reader practically screaming, "Ahh! Get on with it and fall in love," :P
It was interesting to see Lady Trice again and reintroduce her after the previous incident that took place in the story.
Congrats on your marriage, and I'm really quite sorry to hear about your miscarriage. The quote is beautiful and I wish you all the best.
Keep writing because I look forward to my FP alerts for Celestia of the Thorns every day :)
6IfWeWereInLoveFirst things first :P
Brill chapter. Amazingly interesting, as usually but you added some more elements of mystery and fantasy. ;)
Nice ending, it ends with Celeste slightly confused with her feelings about Shaul, and the reader practically screaming, "Ahh! Get on with it and fall in love," :P
It was interesting to see Lady Trice again and reintroduce her after the previous incident that took place in the story.
Congrats on your marriage, and I'm really quite sorry to hear about your miscarriage. The quote is beautiful and I wish you all the best.
Keep writing because I look forward to my FP alerts for Celestia of the Thorns every day :)
11/21/2010 c13 2Leanna de Weisdorn
I really loved the chapter. Know its short, but true.
Take care.
LW
What your sister wrote is true ... an unborn child to perfect for this world.
2Leanna de WeisdornI really loved the chapter. Know its short, but true.
Take care.
LW
What your sister wrote is true ... an unborn child to perfect for this world.
11/21/2010 c13 SnoQueen
I'm sorry to hear about your loss. It must've been hard on you during this time, and I would like to thank you for sharing this with us all. Its not easy telling everyone, let alone strangers, the most personal of things, and I admire your courage and strength for being able to.
Albeit, you write so well! I can't even begin to tell you every single thought I was thinking whilst reading this - most of them going something like, 'Oh my God...she is an amazing writer.' I'm trying to be creative now (especially since exams are over!), and reading this chapter has had me find new inspiration for writing!
I don't even think I can begin to explain how much of a good writer you are!
Thank you, again. Stay strong!
~ SnoQueen
I'm sorry to hear about your loss. It must've been hard on you during this time, and I would like to thank you for sharing this with us all. Its not easy telling everyone, let alone strangers, the most personal of things, and I admire your courage and strength for being able to.
Albeit, you write so well! I can't even begin to tell you every single thought I was thinking whilst reading this - most of them going something like, 'Oh my God...she is an amazing writer.' I'm trying to be creative now (especially since exams are over!), and reading this chapter has had me find new inspiration for writing!
I don't even think I can begin to explain how much of a good writer you are!
Thank you, again. Stay strong!
~ SnoQueen
11/21/2010 c13 1Taurus05
Oh, my god. I am truly sorry for your miscarriage. My mum had a miscarriage as well, but now I have a baby brother! He's turning 1 in a month :D Just don't eat yourself up because of it, because it probably wasn't your fault, and as I said, it happens. And don't forget, time heals everything! ;)
Andd...back to the story :D
WHAT? was the first thing I thought when i first found out in was a dream (before I found out that it was REAL!) I was literally going crazy!
Do you know how many times I read the part where she sees Shaul? Dear me, I realised how much I missed him too! :P
Ahh, Shaul being Shaul again melted my heart!
Celeste should just sleep all day so he can be there :D
You know what? There's this weirrdd thing-your chapters keep on getting better! This doesn't happen often, trust me. Some stories just kinda get lost in itself over time. NOT this story.
I hope you'll upload soon!
But of course, I understand if you can't.
Well done for being so strong!
oh, did I forget to say that this was a GREAT-TASTIC chapter?
:P
1Taurus05Oh, my god. I am truly sorry for your miscarriage. My mum had a miscarriage as well, but now I have a baby brother! He's turning 1 in a month :D Just don't eat yourself up because of it, because it probably wasn't your fault, and as I said, it happens. And don't forget, time heals everything! ;)
Andd...back to the story :D
WHAT? was the first thing I thought when i first found out in was a dream (before I found out that it was REAL!) I was literally going crazy!
Do you know how many times I read the part where she sees Shaul? Dear me, I realised how much I missed him too! :P
Ahh, Shaul being Shaul again melted my heart!
Celeste should just sleep all day so he can be there :D
You know what? There's this weirrdd thing-your chapters keep on getting better! This doesn't happen often, trust me. Some stories just kinda get lost in itself over time. NOT this story.
I hope you'll upload soon!
But of course, I understand if you can't.
Well done for being so strong!
oh, did I forget to say that this was a GREAT-TASTIC chapter?
:P
11/21/2010 c13 3Lisaflowers
oh my god.
so good.
like, so amazing.
Horrible review since i'm practically asleep,
but i'm sorry about your miscarriage. My aunt had four before she had my cousin. :'(
You'll have a beautiful baby when the time is right. :)
And, I LOVED the sexual frustration between Shaul and Celeste. I honestly think they are one of my favorite characters i've read on fictionpress.
:)
update soon!
3Lisaflowersoh my god.
so good.
like, so amazing.
Horrible review since i'm practically asleep,
but i'm sorry about your miscarriage. My aunt had four before she had my cousin. :'(
You'll have a beautiful baby when the time is right. :)
And, I LOVED the sexual frustration between Shaul and Celeste. I honestly think they are one of my favorite characters i've read on fictionpress.
:)
update soon!
11/21/2010 c13 meropes
I am very sorry to hear about your loss. It must be a very difficult time for you right now...and that makes your newest update even more special . A beautiful and unique story, that gets better and better every time you update.
I am very sorry to hear about your loss. It must be a very difficult time for you right now...and that makes your newest update even more special . A beautiful and unique story, that gets better and better every time you update.
11/21/2010 c13 ColourCascade
I love this story so far! You have a really nice writing style. Update as soon as you can!
I love this story so far! You have a really nice writing style. Update as soon as you can!
11/21/2010 c13 Anonymous
I've been keeping track of your story for a while; ghosting it if you will. Its really an interesting original story that I'm happy that I chose to click on it the first time. I'm sorry for your loss and I wish you and your husband the best. (: Cheers.
I've been keeping track of your story for a while; ghosting it if you will. Its really an interesting original story that I'm happy that I chose to click on it the first time. I'm sorry for your loss and I wish you and your husband the best. (: Cheers.
11/21/2010 c13 EFTA
I'm so sorry to hear that... But everything happens fldna reason. Good luck to you and your husband. And please cont writing. You are amazing.
I'm so sorry to hear that... But everything happens fldna reason. Good luck to you and your husband. And please cont writing. You are amazing.
11/20/2010 c13 xcrazyladyo
WOW! I nearly forgot how awesome this story is! Please update again soon. I was glad that Shaul made an appearance (no matter how brief). Turns out i miss his character as well :o)
I'm really sorry to hear about the news and wish you only the best. That was a lovely quote your sister sent you.
WOW! I nearly forgot how awesome this story is! Please update again soon. I was glad that Shaul made an appearance (no matter how brief). Turns out i miss his character as well :o)
I'm really sorry to hear about the news and wish you only the best. That was a lovely quote your sister sent you.
11/20/2010 c13 xInkMusique
I'm sorry to hear about your loss :( The quote was really sweet though.
I'm liking the new Trice :) and her dream of Shaul~ though at the end she says she missed him too, but he never said that he missed her. So maybe add a paragraph about her thinking that he mustve visited because he missed her or have him say something that lets her know that he missed her. Or you could just take out the too. :)
I'm sorry to hear about your loss :( The quote was really sweet though.
I'm liking the new Trice :) and her dream of Shaul~ though at the end she says she missed him too, but he never said that he missed her. So maybe add a paragraph about her thinking that he mustve visited because he missed her or have him say something that lets her know that he missed her. Or you could just take out the too. :)
11/20/2010 c13 flunkybubbleshorts
Hey! Firstly, about the story, cause I am still on a high from Shaul's presence :P
Total Oh-My-Gawd appearance, I must say :D he was beyond awesome! More importantly, you managed to include more mysteriousness - didn't think that was possible :D
Plus, good character change with Trice also. I'm glad Celeste found another lady friend besides the Princess.
More importantly, take care of yourself, okay? I can only imagine the number of people who must be offering their services as a crying-shoulder. It feels bad to even hear about something like this and I just hope you'll be fine. But seriously, just be happy, okay?
Hey! Firstly, about the story, cause I am still on a high from Shaul's presence :P
Total Oh-My-Gawd appearance, I must say :D he was beyond awesome! More importantly, you managed to include more mysteriousness - didn't think that was possible :D
Plus, good character change with Trice also. I'm glad Celeste found another lady friend besides the Princess.
More importantly, take care of yourself, okay? I can only imagine the number of people who must be offering their services as a crying-shoulder. It feels bad to even hear about something like this and I just hope you'll be fine. But seriously, just be happy, okay?
11/20/2010 c13 2asianinvasion0530
Aw she misses him! And hopefully there was some piece of the real Shaul in her dream and he misses her too. =]
Also, good thinking on Celeste's part otherwise Nolan would have died! Which would be sad. =[
Anywho, onto the real world, OMG that is so sad! I'm sorry that happened to you...=[ I'm glad you're coping well though! It'll get better.
2asianinvasion0530Aw she misses him! And hopefully there was some piece of the real Shaul in her dream and he misses her too. =]
Also, good thinking on Celeste's part otherwise Nolan would have died! Which would be sad. =[
Anywho, onto the real world, OMG that is so sad! I'm sorry that happened to you...=[ I'm glad you're coping well though! It'll get better.