for Celestia of the Thorns4/2/2011 c14 forever strong
hey! its been two months since u updated! why the long wait?
haha this is the 4th time i reread this chapter waiting for an update!
some grammer errors:
this came up multiple times. when you want to say blah blah blah BECAUSE blah blah, you dont put a comma before the because
ex. We quickly crossed the bridge because it was going to fall. See? no comma since its a dependent phrase and not an independent.
this rule applies to "instead" and "until" also since ive seen you made the same mistakes with them.
but yeah. update please!
hey! its been two months since u updated! why the long wait?
haha this is the 4th time i reread this chapter waiting for an update!
some grammer errors:
this came up multiple times. when you want to say blah blah blah BECAUSE blah blah, you dont put a comma before the because
ex. We quickly crossed the bridge because it was going to fall. See? no comma since its a dependent phrase and not an independent.
this rule applies to "instead" and "until" also since ive seen you made the same mistakes with them.
but yeah. update please!
3/22/2011 c1 
3Thulia
Hiya
so your just wow, and I really mean wow your a writer every one wants to be.
You have so many reviews (the most ive seen on some ones fp profile) to proove
what an exellent writer you are,althogh ,and this is my opinion no offence, your
dialogue can be a bit off at times,i heard its one of the most important parts of a story
so I thought I wouldjust point it out.
Any way please update son becuase waiting for this story's next chap
will be the death of me!lol
hope you and your family are well.
good luck.
bye bye x
3ThuliaHiya
so your just wow, and I really mean wow your a writer every one wants to be.
You have so many reviews (the most ive seen on some ones fp profile) to proove
what an exellent writer you are,althogh ,and this is my opinion no offence, your
dialogue can be a bit off at times,i heard its one of the most important parts of a story
so I thought I wouldjust point it out.
Any way please update son becuase waiting for this story's next chap
will be the death of me!lol
hope you and your family are well.
good luck.
bye bye x
3/7/2011 c14 copperxoxo
OMGSH ! AH i have been checking if you updated this story since Januaray 2 ! This is my most favourite story i have EVER read and trust me i read alot ! So like please pleaase update , pretty pleaase :$
I hope everything is going well with your family, if that is keeping you back then nvm concentrate on your family first :$
But if not UPDATE ! Thankyou :$
OMGSH ! AH i have been checking if you updated this story since Januaray 2 ! This is my most favourite story i have EVER read and trust me i read alot ! So like please pleaase update , pretty pleaase :$
I hope everything is going well with your family, if that is keeping you back then nvm concentrate on your family first :$
But if not UPDATE ! Thankyou :$
3/4/2011 c14 Ms
ah! OMG! PLEASE update soon! This is my favorite kind of story, and this is one of the best of it's kind!
ah! OMG! PLEASE update soon! This is my favorite kind of story, and this is one of the best of it's kind!
3/2/2011 c1 cookiewolf
LOVE LOVE LOVE, the characters so far=) Nikos is is awesome and I love all the magic and mysteriousness of this story ;)
LOVE LOVE LOVE, the characters so far=) Nikos is is awesome and I love all the magic and mysteriousness of this story ;)
2/26/2011 c14 Fantasy's Dreamer
awesome but hopeful she doesn't try to steal celestia's man but your story is the best please update son! - lily
awesome but hopeful she doesn't try to steal celestia's man but your story is the best please update son! - lily
2/26/2011 c14 8Justine Selene
Wow! A good friend recommended this story to me, and I have to say that it's one of the best I've read so far! I adore Celeste and how strong she is, yet how feminine and graceful she is! She's a great main character! I also love all the princes and especially Shaul! I applaud you for sticking with this story for so long. I can't wait for the updates ^^ I wish you the best of luck and I stay tuned!
8Justine SeleneWow! A good friend recommended this story to me, and I have to say that it's one of the best I've read so far! I adore Celeste and how strong she is, yet how feminine and graceful she is! She's a great main character! I also love all the princes and especially Shaul! I applaud you for sticking with this story for so long. I can't wait for the updates ^^ I wish you the best of luck and I stay tuned!
2/8/2011 c14 okeydokes
I love this story hehe the less I read of shaul, the anticipation builds even greater! I can't wait for them to be reunited. I suddenly thought of your story today and was upset when I couldn't remember the name to enter into the search bar, but after a couple of minutes, of course I remembered my favorite character's name, shaul haha. I'm off to read the one shot! what a pleasant surprise to find tonight, I can't wait for the next chapter!
I love this story hehe the less I read of shaul, the anticipation builds even greater! I can't wait for them to be reunited. I suddenly thought of your story today and was upset when I couldn't remember the name to enter into the search bar, but after a couple of minutes, of course I remembered my favorite character's name, shaul haha. I'm off to read the one shot! what a pleasant surprise to find tonight, I can't wait for the next chapter!
2/7/2011 c14 3phelps112
I really like this story so far, I like how Shaul is so closed off, and the mystery that surrounds Celeste. Since she must have been adopted did she know? Do her brothers know?
3phelps112I really like this story so far, I like how Shaul is so closed off, and the mystery that surrounds Celeste. Since she must have been adopted did she know? Do her brothers know?
2/6/2011 c14 jmn23
I just found out about your story and I really like it. It is different and unique. Full of adventure and sort of mystery. Actually it reminds me of an anime...
I would love to see more and I am curious about the magic surrounding your characters. Hope you'll update soon!
I just found out about your story and I really like it. It is different and unique. Full of adventure and sort of mystery. Actually it reminds me of an anime...
I would love to see more and I am curious about the magic surrounding your characters. Hope you'll update soon!