for The Fall of the Elf Queen11/8/2009 c1 Lyra Kaji
PLEASE, please, please, please, please, please, DON'T BOLD AND UNDERLINE! JUST USE ITALICS! ROAR! Pet peeve. Enough said.
Aside from that, nice chapter. The suspense at the end was AWESOME!
Belorfiad is funny. Sarcastic elves are awesome and underappreciated/used. Like to see people finally getting away from the cliche Lord of the Rings stereotypical elf that's all about manners and looks and being really really boring. YAY YOU! (That being said; I love Lord of the Rings, I just hate when people mindlessly copy. Do your own work, people.)
PLEASE, please, please, please, please, please, DON'T BOLD AND UNDERLINE! JUST USE ITALICS! ROAR! Pet peeve. Enough said.
Aside from that, nice chapter. The suspense at the end was AWESOME!
Belorfiad is funny. Sarcastic elves are awesome and underappreciated/used. Like to see people finally getting away from the cliche Lord of the Rings stereotypical elf that's all about manners and looks and being really really boring. YAY YOU! (That being said; I love Lord of the Rings, I just hate when people mindlessly copy. Do your own work, people.)