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9Spontaneous Juju
Hmmm... definitely an interesting start. :) I do think that June overreacted when Ryan ran into her with his bike. It might have been more understandable if you added a list of little things that had been going wrong throughout her day instead of just "I didn't do well on my test." It makes her seem sort of childish and harder to relate to when that one thing got her upset enough to freak out on someone who seemed so genuinely apologetic after running into her. Other than that, this seems really realistic and well-written; I can't wait for the next update! :)
-Spontaneous Juju
9Spontaneous JujuHmmm... definitely an interesting start. :) I do think that June overreacted when Ryan ran into her with his bike. It might have been more understandable if you added a list of little things that had been going wrong throughout her day instead of just "I didn't do well on my test." It makes her seem sort of childish and harder to relate to when that one thing got her upset enough to freak out on someone who seemed so genuinely apologetic after running into her. Other than that, this seems really realistic and well-written; I can't wait for the next update! :)
-Spontaneous Juju
3/26/2010 c2 England-Obsessed-Desi
Hey!
I love this story...:)
It has a good plot and storyline, and i also love these kinds of relationships!
PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE? For darling little me :))?
JK...please do try though! :D
Hey!
I love this story...:)
It has a good plot and storyline, and i also love these kinds of relationships!
PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE? For darling little me :))?
JK...please do try though! :D
1/25/2010 c1 Kyllex
I like, I like! This is well written and interesting. Can't wait to see where this goes, it sounds like it'll be good!
I like, I like! This is well written and interesting. Can't wait to see where this goes, it sounds like it'll be good!
12/28/2009 c2 26pinkguppie
Can't wait for the next chapter. I guessed that Ryan was the bike guy :)
Loved the pictures you chose for each of the characters :)
26pinkguppieCan't wait for the next chapter. I guessed that Ryan was the bike guy :)
Loved the pictures you chose for each of the characters :)
11/30/2009 c2 7Once Upon a Time is Forever
Great new chapter, I love the way June and Ryan can't stand each other right now ;D Oh and I love Alyssa and the way you portrayed their sisterly relationship, it was very true to the way sisters interact.
Can't wait for the next update :]
7Once Upon a Time is ForeverGreat new chapter, I love the way June and Ryan can't stand each other right now ;D Oh and I love Alyssa and the way you portrayed their sisterly relationship, it was very true to the way sisters interact.
Can't wait for the next update :]
11/23/2009 c1 27Just Silly Me
This is really interesting so far! I'm loving June! Is she Asian? Cao is an Asian last name, after all. If she's Asian, are you Asian too? I'm Asian. Haha, anyway, enough about Asianness... this is a very good chapter, although it was kind of long. :P. It could possibly use a few grammar adjustments, however, if you want someone to help you with editing. I'm here if you want me to but it's not an absolute necessity. But it never hurts to have an extra pair of eyes! Let me know and update soon! -JSM
27Just Silly MeThis is really interesting so far! I'm loving June! Is she Asian? Cao is an Asian last name, after all. If she's Asian, are you Asian too? I'm Asian. Haha, anyway, enough about Asianness... this is a very good chapter, although it was kind of long. :P. It could possibly use a few grammar adjustments, however, if you want someone to help you with editing. I'm here if you want me to but it's not an absolute necessity. But it never hurts to have an extra pair of eyes! Let me know and update soon! -JSM
11/22/2009 c1 ILuvLucasPeytonScott
This is a very good story so far. I love it. I really like the kind of stories where, oh am I ever going to find "the right guy" love. So good job. Alyssa is the sister right. I jsut wanted to make sure.
This is a very good story so far. I love it. I really like the kind of stories where, oh am I ever going to find "the right guy" love. So good job. Alyssa is the sister right. I jsut wanted to make sure.
11/19/2009 c4 truebleu
Do you go to Yale?
I love this story.
I can relate to June in so many ways!
UPDATE!
Do you go to Yale?
I love this story.
I can relate to June in so many ways!
UPDATE!
11/13/2009 c4 sappyromancelvr
oh wow.
i hope june didn't come on as desperate. I know she's better than that. :/
Update soon!
oh wow.
i hope june didn't come on as desperate. I know she's better than that. :/
Update soon!
11/12/2009 c4 XxSiennaxX
Dylan seems like a nice guy but I wish they'd just be friends and she'd start to care about Ryan - I can hope at least.
Can't wait for another chapter, loved this one and it really seems like David has something he's not telling Alyssa - like he doesn't really want a wedding, or doesn't want to go through with one.
Dylan seems like a nice guy but I wish they'd just be friends and she'd start to care about Ryan - I can hope at least.
Can't wait for another chapter, loved this one and it really seems like David has something he's not telling Alyssa - like he doesn't really want a wedding, or doesn't want to go through with one.
11/12/2009 c4 2asianinvasion0530
Yay June got a date! =] And Dylan seems cute too. Both appearance and personality wise.
And dude I totally feel the same way about the Peace Corps. I mean, it's a great cause and all, and I really admire the people who do join, but I myself would never do that 'cause I'm too...high maintenance I guess from living in the U.S. all my life haha.
And hm Ryan being meek about the dance lessons? I'm thinking he's starting to like her...=]
2asianinvasion0530Yay June got a date! =] And Dylan seems cute too. Both appearance and personality wise.
And dude I totally feel the same way about the Peace Corps. I mean, it's a great cause and all, and I really admire the people who do join, but I myself would never do that 'cause I'm too...high maintenance I guess from living in the U.S. all my life haha.
And hm Ryan being meek about the dance lessons? I'm thinking he's starting to like her...=]