for What You Need11/26/2010 c1 Scott
Hello love hows it going? i randomly come on here every once in a while and i think it is time for you to start writing again :)
Hello love hows it going? i randomly come on here every once in a while and i think it is time for you to start writing again :)
11/11/2009 c1 
879Moondog Dozier
This has an excellent pace and message. The constancy at the beginning of each line gives the reader a conditioned known, which frames the progression well. Some great points made here.
879Moondog DozierThis has an excellent pace and message. The constancy at the beginning of each line gives the reader a conditioned known, which frames the progression well. Some great points made here.