for Break the Line9/24/2014 c9 
3Daggian
Hey, it has been years since you added anything. What happened? I see you still write. I really this.
3DaggianHey, it has been years since you added anything. What happened? I see you still write. I really this.
2/19/2014 c9 OMNOMNOMNOM
dat cliffhanger tho
dat cliffhanger tho
12/23/2013 c9 Guest
Omg, you have to write more. Im dieing here!
Omg, you have to write more. Im dieing here!
10/30/2013 c9 2OnyxBuddha
Please UPDATE it's been years. This is a truly amazing story I just started reading it last night (10-29-13) last night and finished (10-30-13) this afternoon. The walk the line series is amazing! Don't leave it as it. Quit being a tease. 3 please update!
2OnyxBuddhaPlease UPDATE it's been years. This is a truly amazing story I just started reading it last night (10-29-13) last night and finished (10-30-13) this afternoon. The walk the line series is amazing! Don't leave it as it. Quit being a tease. 3 please update!
10/18/2013 c9 1Black is Beautiful
No! You can't leave it there! Please don't keep is hanging on a cliffhanger! Please update soon!
1Black is BeautifulNo! You can't leave it there! Please don't keep is hanging on a cliffhanger! Please update soon!
3/9/2012 c9 Love in All Forms
I really love this story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this story. I am in LOVE with this story.
I really love this story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this story. I am in LOVE with this story.
3/3/2012 c1 ll-writingfreak-ll
THIS IS AMAZING!
I know its been ages since you posted please do continue! i love this universe its fantastic and i hope for my sanity that you do continue and complete this story! So before i read anymore can you please tell me if you will be continuing it?
thanks!
THIS IS AMAZING!
I know its been ages since you posted please do continue! i love this universe its fantastic and i hope for my sanity that you do continue and complete this story! So before i read anymore can you please tell me if you will be continuing it?
thanks!
1/13/2012 c9 Lori
Hi!
I know it's been centuries since you last updated, but please, please, please continue! I've read The Thin Line and Walk The Line a few months ago, but I hadn't noticed this story. Imagine how thrilled I was when I came by it earlier today! I've grown very fond of these characters and I'm completely in love with Masen and just dying to read the rest of it. I'm sad, though, because of Ava. Even though I have to admit that I was a bit suspicious of how quickly she got used to them. I mean,the girl was just brought into a house full of vampires but it didn't scare her minimally. I was a bit put off by that, but I guess her not being human explains it. On the other hand, she could just be a very adaptable person. Or she was just too desperate to get out of the streets. Now that I think of it, it's the most plausible theory I have. Is there any possibility of the vampire who attacked her being more than they realized? In that case, Ava could have been originally good, but the bite did something to her, maybe? God, I'm just dying to know!
Hoping you come back to this amazing story,
Lori
Hi!
I know it's been centuries since you last updated, but please, please, please continue! I've read The Thin Line and Walk The Line a few months ago, but I hadn't noticed this story. Imagine how thrilled I was when I came by it earlier today! I've grown very fond of these characters and I'm completely in love with Masen and just dying to read the rest of it. I'm sad, though, because of Ava. Even though I have to admit that I was a bit suspicious of how quickly she got used to them. I mean,the girl was just brought into a house full of vampires but it didn't scare her minimally. I was a bit put off by that, but I guess her not being human explains it. On the other hand, she could just be a very adaptable person. Or she was just too desperate to get out of the streets. Now that I think of it, it's the most plausible theory I have. Is there any possibility of the vampire who attacked her being more than they realized? In that case, Ava could have been originally good, but the bite did something to her, maybe? God, I'm just dying to know!
Hoping you come back to this amazing story,
Lori
12/5/2011 c5 Lascochick
Why did she have to lose her virginity... So not cliche
Why did she have to lose her virginity... So not cliche