for The Missing Marble6/10/2012 c1 jaefortheyun
Wording is good. There didn't seem to be filler/excess stuff. Nice drabble! :D
Wording is good. There didn't seem to be filler/excess stuff. Nice drabble! :D
2/5/2010 c1 
5candii-apple
Interesting drabble. I totally didn't expect the ending (which is a good thing because twists are always quite genius :D) If you're thinking about extending this, maybe consider adding a bit more suspense before we find about the Bogeyman? Great work! :)
5candii-appleInteresting drabble. I totally didn't expect the ending (which is a good thing because twists are always quite genius :D) If you're thinking about extending this, maybe consider adding a bit more suspense before we find about the Bogeyman? Great work! :)
1/4/2010 c1 Naa-Chan
Meh, too lazy to make an account.
O_O This story kinda freaked me out xD
BUT I LOVED IT! w
Meh, too lazy to make an account.
O_O This story kinda freaked me out xD
BUT I LOVED IT! w