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2/22/2005 c1 30Weeba
A well-put-together little story. Poor you; perhaps by now the friendship has been patched up? Maybe? I hope so. I know what it's like to lose a friend; it's no fun. Let's hope at least you had other friends to help you go through it.

If it isn't over by now (I'm assuming, since it's 4 years later), then more power to you for hanging in there. Friends should stick together, especially when the thing pulling them apart is something as sad as this.

As to the poem itself: excellent. A very interesting and well-executed structure, with the 3-2-1 thing; you're a true poet.

~Weeba~
6/22/2001 c1 kekadu
Cool! Very interesting layout. I like it. You don't see many poems like this. It reads well.
6/2/2001 c1 73Ryu Sakana
Depressed, morbid, tragic, slightly disturbing, dark, deep...yup, I love this poem.
5/9/2001 c1 6MiSsCaNDyPuNk
GoOD PoEmZ TaSh! VaReEh CrEaTiVe!

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