for Anise5/4/2012 c19 jaime
Such a good chapter i notice a couple spelling mistakes but over all great. I loved the last paragraph in this chapter it was so sweet and cute! CWTRM
Such a good chapter i notice a couple spelling mistakes but over all great. I loved the last paragraph in this chapter it was so sweet and cute! CWTRM
5/4/2012 c13 Jaime
Poor Camaron :(
Poor Camaron :(
5/4/2012 c12 Jaime
She doesn't seem to mad with him anymore, i know i would have been still but i cant wait to find out what the witch says
She doesn't seem to mad with him anymore, i know i would have been still but i cant wait to find out what the witch says
5/4/2012 c11 Jaime
I went from happy to mad. Damn old school men. Good chapter not much wrong. CWTRM
I went from happy to mad. Damn old school men. Good chapter not much wrong. CWTRM
5/4/2012 c10 Jaime
I like that she is trying to fit in, and i bet Drustan must really hate being ordered around by her, hahaha, i get a kick out of thinking about how men back then would balk at a women for doing that.
I like that she is trying to fit in, and i bet Drustan must really hate being ordered around by her, hahaha, i get a kick out of thinking about how men back then would balk at a women for doing that.
5/4/2012 c9 Jaime
Awww! *does a little happy dance* that was so sweet and cute!
Awww! *does a little happy dance* that was so sweet and cute!
5/4/2012 c8 Jaime
Camaron is so funny, a bundle of emotions. But god i feel for her, it would really blow to have all these feelings for a guy you don't even know. GC, i really like this story. Drustan is funny to, I loved how he caught he staring in the last chapter.
Camaron is so funny, a bundle of emotions. But god i feel for her, it would really blow to have all these feelings for a guy you don't even know. GC, i really like this story. Drustan is funny to, I loved how he caught he staring in the last chapter.
5/4/2012 c6 Guest
Wow so much just happened, I'm so I'm a little confused. There weren't that many spelling errors but i don't think they used the word akward in that time. Interesting chapter can't wait to read the next
Wow so much just happened, I'm so I'm a little confused. There weren't that many spelling errors but i don't think they used the word akward in that time. Interesting chapter can't wait to read the next
5/4/2012 c5 jaime
Hahaha no one could resist that type of sexy-ness even if they tried, i was wonder how they got in that position if she was in that old school dress.
Hahaha no one could resist that type of sexy-ness even if they tried, i was wonder how they got in that position if she was in that old school dress.
5/3/2012 c4 jaime
I really liked this chapter it was really great. Not to many errors and great deployment.
I really liked this chapter it was really great. Not to many errors and great deployment.
5/3/2012 c3 jaime
Her is so sweet, i love the roughness he has, and i hope people don't think she is a witch of anything. Plus i think i would do what cam did in that situation good chapter cant wait for more
Her is so sweet, i love the roughness he has, and i hope people don't think she is a witch of anything. Plus i think i would do what cam did in that situation good chapter cant wait for more
5/3/2012 c2 jaime
I really would loved to know more about her. Right now she seen so emotional. And you misspelled he saw with his last breath. But other than that great chapter i can't wait to find out what is going to happen to her
I really would loved to know more about her. Right now she seen so emotional. And you misspelled he saw with his last breath. But other than that great chapter i can't wait to find out what is going to happen to her
5/2/2012 c1 Jamie
Good first chapter i felt i could relate to the guy More then the girl. her part felt a little rushed and confusing bit of was still good
Good first chapter i felt i could relate to the guy More then the girl. her part felt a little rushed and confusing bit of was still good
5/2/2012 c30 sappyromancelvr
Great last chapter! Can't wait to hear more about Murray though! Maybe we'll see some more of Cameron and her Laird? ;)
Great last chapter! Can't wait to hear more about Murray though! Maybe we'll see some more of Cameron and her Laird? ;)
4/16/2012 c29 koyama
hi,
jaaaaaaaahhhhhh, finished. it's nearly good enough to forget what a clifhangerdevil you are but i think i forgive you because you updated so fast ^_^. am i gracious or what? *angelicsmile*
to make it short i love your story. and i think there is no need for an epilog. but if you love this characters so much you could write another story that use some things from your original one. e.g.: the lovestory between murray and diana (or someone else) or even better a story between the time drustan and cameron comes. there are so many possiblilities like the story after drustan travel through the time (in his original timeline and/or his new one) or some story of the mystical written instructions of one of the maclean descendant of durstans uncle.
okay thats all
bye bye koyama
hi,
jaaaaaaaahhhhhh, finished. it's nearly good enough to forget what a clifhangerdevil you are but i think i forgive you because you updated so fast ^_^. am i gracious or what? *angelicsmile*
to make it short i love your story. and i think there is no need for an epilog. but if you love this characters so much you could write another story that use some things from your original one. e.g.: the lovestory between murray and diana (or someone else) or even better a story between the time drustan and cameron comes. there are so many possiblilities like the story after drustan travel through the time (in his original timeline and/or his new one) or some story of the mystical written instructions of one of the maclean descendant of durstans uncle.
okay thats all
bye bye koyama