
4/5/2014 c1
1kingdinkelmen
This story is really good! you have real talent. it's entertaining and very well written.

This story is really good! you have real talent. it's entertaining and very well written.
12/10/2010 c20
7Starr E. Knites
〒A〒 6hrs straight of reading...it was worth it~ luv the whole story and the twist at the end. i have to admit that kon koshi is my favorite character. i wouldnt mind him and aya getting together, but i guess jumihon has dibbs on that. ^^ well, all i can say is that this is one serious love story, and im glad youre writting it. maybe it can be published?
p.s.) youre about to get married right? when is your wedding going to be? (sorry if im prying, but i love to hear about wedding stuff. its so cute♪).

〒A〒 6hrs straight of reading...it was worth it~ luv the whole story and the twist at the end. i have to admit that kon koshi is my favorite character. i wouldnt mind him and aya getting together, but i guess jumihon has dibbs on that. ^^ well, all i can say is that this is one serious love story, and im glad youre writting it. maybe it can be published?
p.s.) youre about to get married right? when is your wedding going to be? (sorry if im prying, but i love to hear about wedding stuff. its so cute♪).
10/25/2010 c19 mizz. vixen
:D awesome chapter!
:D awesome chapter!
8/10/2010 c17
4FairyOfDeath
My suggestion would be for you to slow it down more. You have alot of great ideas, and the plot keeps its interest so you can slow down a bit. The last chapter or two seem a little rushed. Also you should probably tie in Kon-Koshi soon, since he was so crucial to the beginning of the story. he was personally my favorite

My suggestion would be for you to slow it down more. You have alot of great ideas, and the plot keeps its interest so you can slow down a bit. The last chapter or two seem a little rushed. Also you should probably tie in Kon-Koshi soon, since he was so crucial to the beginning of the story. he was personally my favorite
8/10/2010 c14 A
I like is so far, but I miss the first guy that you had in the story, Kon something? he kinda just dropped out of the story for twelve chapters
I like is so far, but I miss the first guy that you had in the story, Kon something? he kinda just dropped out of the story for twelve chapters
8/9/2010 c17 mizz.vixen
Woot,awesome chapter!
Woot,awesome chapter!