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4/5/2014 c1 1kingdinkelmen
This story is really good! you have real talent. it's entertaining and very well written.
7/25/2012 c4 CrimsonsNight
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7/25/2012 c2 CrimsonsNight
its not bad a little curious though.
7/25/2012 c1 CrimsonsNight
hmm very interesting you have a few error you should look over.
5/21/2012 c3 Soutrick
Time to be sold

hope she doesnt end with kon
5/21/2012 c1 Soutrick
Interesting

curious about her fate
1/6/2011 c8 9Nadel
hehe nice
12/10/2010 c20 7Starr E. Knites
〒A〒 6hrs straight of reading...it was worth it~ luv the whole story and the twist at the end. i have to admit that kon koshi is my favorite character. i wouldnt mind him and aya getting together, but i guess jumihon has dibbs on that. ^^ well, all i can say is that this is one serious love story, and im glad youre writting it. maybe it can be published?

p.s.) youre about to get married right? when is your wedding going to be? (sorry if im prying, but i love to hear about wedding stuff. its so cute♪).
10/25/2010 c19 mizz. vixen
:D awesome chapter!
10/8/2010 c18 BOOKS13
love this story
8/10/2010 c17 4FairyOfDeath
My suggestion would be for you to slow it down more. You have alot of great ideas, and the plot keeps its interest so you can slow down a bit. The last chapter or two seem a little rushed. Also you should probably tie in Kon-Koshi soon, since he was so crucial to the beginning of the story. he was personally my favorite
8/10/2010 c14 A
I like is so far, but I miss the first guy that you had in the story, Kon something? he kinda just dropped out of the story for twelve chapters
8/9/2010 c17 mizz.vixen
Woot,awesome chapter!
8/9/2010 c17 2Dramatisch
Great story! It's entertaining and well-written. Hope you update soon.
7/19/2010 c16 2Dalek17
Dude! You have to update! I love this story so much! Please don't give up on the story! It is so awesome it's not even funny.. I'm like addicted to it.. I have to know what happens...
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