for Goddess in the Painting11/17/2015 c1 Guest
MA content is not permitted upon this website. You cannot describe penetration or pleasuring of certain areas of the body. The M rating is not for children under the age of 16 with mention of non-explicit sex or violence. Explicit scenes are MA which, as said before, is not allowed.
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MA content is not permitted upon this website. You cannot describe penetration or pleasuring of certain areas of the body. The M rating is not for children under the age of 16 with mention of non-explicit sex or violence. Explicit scenes are MA which, as said before, is not allowed.
This story will be reported until it is either fixed or removed. Not only is it at risk of removal, but your account as well. You have been reported.
( I found your story by browsing the Vocaloid section. I found your FP account through Google. It isn't hard to find you know. Just one little Google search, and one little comment could give you away. If I can find you, other reports can too.)
3/8/2015 c1 fxrkslullaby
I loved it! And yes. Allan seems like he could be a jerk but turn into a puddle of goo for the right girl!
I loved it! And yes. Allan seems like he could be a jerk but turn into a puddle of goo for the right girl!
1/15/2011 c1 Sara
I liked this short story and it had a nice, funny ending! can't wait to read more.
I liked this short story and it had a nice, funny ending! can't wait to read more.
12/31/2009 c1 kishi
hey, i thought your story was properly made and it got me high, lol... however, the fact that both of your character exclaimed love for each other bothers me a little because it was a bit sudden and for me, a little unrealistic. maybe if they had some communication earlier would connect the love emotion. anyway, i like this piece! write more?
hey, i thought your story was properly made and it got me high, lol... however, the fact that both of your character exclaimed love for each other bothers me a little because it was a bit sudden and for me, a little unrealistic. maybe if they had some communication earlier would connect the love emotion. anyway, i like this piece! write more?
12/3/2009 c1 
2Kissed by the Moon
I agree make a lemon for Allen. :D I love this story, it's awesome! :]
2Kissed by the MoonI agree make a lemon for Allen. :D I love this story, it's awesome! :]
11/28/2009 c1 1PeachyIrony
Beautiful story with a nice little twist :3 I'm surprised that the jocks didn't figure it out... okay not that surprised but still lol
You should definatly to a lemon for Allen. I'd love to see how he contrasts to Carter :)
1PeachyIronyBeautiful story with a nice little twist :3 I'm surprised that the jocks didn't figure it out... okay not that surprised but still lol
You should definatly to a lemon for Allen. I'd love to see how he contrasts to Carter :)
11/25/2009 c1 JellyBabes101
hahaha xD
loved the ending!
hahaha xD
loved the ending!