for Mr A Case I'd Like To Crack2/15/2023 c1 Anonymous
That was such a fun one-shot! I am still grinning from ear to ear. Thanks for writing this!
That was such a fun one-shot! I am still grinning from ear to ear. Thanks for writing this!
6/4/2012 c1 Bluebell Balloons
EEEEEEEK. This was so adorable! Haha. I'm personally also partial to nerds, and one's with a *gasp* personality is also a plus! Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see more stories! :D
EEEEEEEK. This was so adorable! Haha. I'm personally also partial to nerds, and one's with a *gasp* personality is also a plus! Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see more stories! :D
7/20/2010 c1 
21rosieroo
aw, that was so cute! I really like the way you described Tyler, he sounds super hot. I'm glad that she tried to upstage him, that was funny!
21rosierooaw, that was so cute! I really like the way you described Tyler, he sounds super hot. I'm glad that she tried to upstage him, that was funny!
6/2/2010 c1 WishBlade
Pure awesomeness-I love finding stories like this! It was written very well...I don't think there was a moment I wasn't smiling while reading this. Thanks for posting! =D
Pure awesomeness-I love finding stories like this! It was written very well...I don't think there was a moment I wasn't smiling while reading this. Thanks for posting! =D
5/12/2010 c1 Pop the Bubble
ohmygod, I really REALLY liked this :)
Could've been longer I guess, with a little more character development, but considering this is just a one-shot, it was awesome
ohmygod, I really REALLY liked this :)
Could've been longer I guess, with a little more character development, but considering this is just a one-shot, it was awesome
12/24/2009 c1 Of The Angels
When you were describing Tyler and his appearance, I was literally drooling. XD
God, do those kind of guys even exist these days? *sighs dreamily* Here's hoping.
This was a very cute one-shot, very well written.
I loved it. Two thumbs up! (: (& favorited, of course.)
When you were describing Tyler and his appearance, I was literally drooling. XD
God, do those kind of guys even exist these days? *sighs dreamily* Here's hoping.
This was a very cute one-shot, very well written.
I loved it. Two thumbs up! (: (& favorited, of course.)
11/30/2009 c1 iiHEARTyuu
Haha this was amusing :) especially when she is talking about his writing, comparing it to his chiselled jaw. lol! And the fact that she loves male watches. It's the most random love I've heard of lol.
I'm curious to the age of the characters and where the story is set - because they seem to be in a club or something for the party and they seem to be in their first year of college?
I'm glad you're back, I love your stories.
Just a few typos I thought I'd mention ...
“No Anna I will no talk to God himself.” - 'no' instead of 'not'.
"If there was one thing I was going to do, that was to prove to Tyler Kingston that I had brains and was different to the rest of the female population." - I think you should change it to 'it was prove to...'
"This seemed to catch Tyler’s attention but I wasn’t sure whether if I was doing a good job in annoying him or simply entertaining him." - I think you changed your mind but forgot to delete a word. I'm not sure if you wanted 'I wasn't sure whether I was ...' or 'I wasn't sure if I was ...'
"...maybe then Id ben able to shuffle further away from the living, breathing Tyler." - I'd be able to...
Anyway, yay for your one-shot :)
Haha this was amusing :) especially when she is talking about his writing, comparing it to his chiselled jaw. lol! And the fact that she loves male watches. It's the most random love I've heard of lol.
I'm curious to the age of the characters and where the story is set - because they seem to be in a club or something for the party and they seem to be in their first year of college?
I'm glad you're back, I love your stories.
Just a few typos I thought I'd mention ...
“No Anna I will no talk to God himself.” - 'no' instead of 'not'.
"If there was one thing I was going to do, that was to prove to Tyler Kingston that I had brains and was different to the rest of the female population." - I think you should change it to 'it was prove to...'
"This seemed to catch Tyler’s attention but I wasn’t sure whether if I was doing a good job in annoying him or simply entertaining him." - I think you changed your mind but forgot to delete a word. I'm not sure if you wanted 'I wasn't sure whether I was ...' or 'I wasn't sure if I was ...'
"...maybe then Id ben able to shuffle further away from the living, breathing Tyler." - I'd be able to...
Anyway, yay for your one-shot :)