
8/27/2012 c15 fanofyourworknow
This is a fantastic story! I love the romace, struggles, and drama!
This is a fantastic story! I love the romace, struggles, and drama!
8/15/2011 c15 lovedthestory
I really loved this story and read it in one sitting...I absolutely loved when Jake sang Crash and Burn song by Savage Garden and also the epilogue was really creative...I will have to check out your other stories too...Keep up the great work!
I really loved this story and read it in one sitting...I absolutely loved when Jake sang Crash and Burn song by Savage Garden and also the epilogue was really creative...I will have to check out your other stories too...Keep up the great work!
5/11/2011 c8
1caitly
I love the last line of this chapter, "As he turned to leave, I felt myself die with every step he took. So why was my heart still beating?" It's absolutely perfect.

I love the last line of this chapter, "As he turned to leave, I felt myself die with every step he took. So why was my heart still beating?" It's absolutely perfect.
5/10/2011 c15 100fan
love it! I laugh, cried, got angry but i loved every minute of it
love it! I laugh, cried, got angry but i loved every minute of it
5/9/2011 c15 t.med
hey, that's a very sweet story, good it all worked out ok in the end.
you did seem to change your mind with a few things as you went through the story. at first it was the deputy head, or something, that her dad got drunk with, then it a police sargeant, for example.
however, it flowed well and had a good feel to it. thanks
hey, that's a very sweet story, good it all worked out ok in the end.
you did seem to change your mind with a few things as you went through the story. at first it was the deputy head, or something, that her dad got drunk with, then it a police sargeant, for example.
however, it flowed well and had a good feel to it. thanks
5/5/2011 c14 Sahara Starhawk
I have been following this from the start. Now that it is over I am still wanting to read more. ^^* Still it was a good story and I like how it ended.
I have been following this from the start. Now that it is over I am still wanting to read more. ^^* Still it was a good story and I like how it ended.
5/2/2011 c13 glitter-whisper
i couldnt help laughing at the last moment. it is so cute! good job on the ending of the chapter. thanks for updating! :)
i couldnt help laughing at the last moment. it is so cute! good job on the ending of the chapter. thanks for updating! :)
4/27/2011 c12 EllaLewis
oh my goodness, Im crying. This is such a good story! Pleasepleaseplease update soon-I love this!
oh my goodness, Im crying. This is such a good story! Pleasepleaseplease update soon-I love this!