for Addicted9/13/2014 c1 Natalie
ADORABLE! I just love Jake, OMG!
Can u make a sequel? Please?
Like their first baby?
ADORABLE! I just love Jake, OMG!
Can u make a sequel? Please?
Like their first baby?
12/19/2013 c1 Guest
I loved it! Very good! (:
I loved it! Very good! (:
5/27/2013 c1 
1Windzor
Very cute story. It was kind of cliche-y, but totally adorable. Jake seems like a very sexy guy! This might seem selfish but I was wondering if you could R&R my story. You don't need to if you don't want to; just trying to get more reviews and input. Keep up the great writing!
1WindzorVery cute story. It was kind of cliche-y, but totally adorable. Jake seems like a very sexy guy! This might seem selfish but I was wondering if you could R&R my story. You don't need to if you don't want to; just trying to get more reviews and input. Keep up the great writing!
9/29/2012 c1 heal me forever
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww MAN WAT IS DISSSSSSS?1? DIS IS FUCKING GOOD except of course d LIAM part ...its BEAUTIFUL ! :)
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww MAN WAT IS DISSSSSSS?1? DIS IS FUCKING GOOD except of course d LIAM part ...its BEAUTIFUL ! :)
9/12/2012 c1 2innoc3nc3cuti3
I found your story last night, and I got to say I really enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to reading future works from you.
2innoc3nc3cuti3I found your story last night, and I got to say I really enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to reading future works from you.
11/11/2011 c1 aaaaakkkkkaaaaaa
i love the end. 'im horny' 'me too'. XD lol
i love the end. 'im horny' 'me too'. XD lol
11/15/2010 c1 3WildestHeart4ever
Loved it! :D its so sweet...besides the fact Jake said nothing of that ever happened but suill :D
3WildestHeart4everLoved it! :D its so sweet...besides the fact Jake said nothing of that ever happened but suill :D
7/16/2010 c1 2Decapit4ted
Hello!
I really, really liked this story you have here! (:
The plot seemed perfectly plotted.
This should be turned into a freaking movie.
That'd be so cool x3
Hm.. what else...
Um... oh yeah!
Well when i was reading it, i was wondering why you didn't split it up into chapters..
Nonetheless it was gr-eat!
Like frosted flakes (:
Speaking of deliciously starched grains,
I laughed so hard when Jake got excited about Maggie buying Cocoa puffs. xD
Ah, splendid story, my friend.
I hope you have a nice day.
Byebye^_^
2Decapit4tedHello!
I really, really liked this story you have here! (:
The plot seemed perfectly plotted.
This should be turned into a freaking movie.
That'd be so cool x3
Hm.. what else...
Um... oh yeah!
Well when i was reading it, i was wondering why you didn't split it up into chapters..
Nonetheless it was gr-eat!
Like frosted flakes (:
Speaking of deliciously starched grains,
I laughed so hard when Jake got excited about Maggie buying Cocoa puffs. xD
Ah, splendid story, my friend.
I hope you have a nice day.
Byebye^_^
6/9/2010 c1 yummy
cute! i know, not a very good review, but still a review, right?
I love how it has a storyline and it has more of a recurring problem. the Liam guy always come back and... yeah!
hm... I write really bad reviews.. :P
cute! i know, not a very good review, but still a review, right?
I love how it has a storyline and it has more of a recurring problem. the Liam guy always come back and... yeah!
hm... I write really bad reviews.. :P
3/29/2010 c1 Hiddengirl10
I really, really like this story. I couldn't stop smiling, well except for the parts when the douche Liam tries to rape her, but then comes Jake & I'm smiling again. Haha Anyway, great story, love it. =)
I really, really like this story. I couldn't stop smiling, well except for the parts when the douche Liam tries to rape her, but then comes Jake & I'm smiling again. Haha Anyway, great story, love it. =)
2/24/2010 c1 7j.echandy711
Okay, usually I don't like shorter stories because I don't feel the plot develops enough with a shorter story and if it does it seems rushed, but I REALLY REALLY liked this! It never seemed rushed and it has a story line that I've always liked.
7j.echandy711Okay, usually I don't like shorter stories because I don't feel the plot develops enough with a shorter story and if it does it seems rushed, but I REALLY REALLY liked this! It never seemed rushed and it has a story line that I've always liked.
2/13/2010 c1 38Around.the.Rainbow
haha I loved it. =D Jake is adorable! he's the man! lol. great job!
38Around.the.Rainbowhaha I loved it. =D Jake is adorable! he's the man! lol. great job!