
3/11/2010 c1 purplemonkeyz48
I luv her (Erin)! and the story 2 lol
purplemonkeyz48
I luv her (Erin)! and the story 2 lol
purplemonkeyz48
11/28/2009 c1
7Insanely Random
This is creepy! But, it is a very good ghost story! Please update soon, you've got me hooked!

This is creepy! But, it is a very good ghost story! Please update soon, you've got me hooked!
11/27/2009 c1
11morticiansdaughter13
good job so far! I dont exactly understandthe main plot but I am hoping that in later chapters I will. I am guessing that Noelle and Mattie are ghosts who are communicating with the living and Will and Cassie are just two random victims of the ghosts. And the four together will sort of be like puppets, listening to Mattie and Noelle while destroying things in the way. Heck, I just got that from the summary and just read through the whole chapter and that is what it feels like. Since when was I SMART? I'm the dumb blonde of my fam and school and here! And the character people up top are FUNNY! Ilthem. They are so funny XD hehe. I'm a lot like Erin! Weird...wonder what that means...oh well
Great job! XD Blake and Erin. Blake is like me because he obessess over his hair. XD
Screw guys. Give me music and dont take it away. Love-fell asleep head in clouds
XD blake and erin=cute couple ;)

good job so far! I dont exactly understandthe main plot but I am hoping that in later chapters I will. I am guessing that Noelle and Mattie are ghosts who are communicating with the living and Will and Cassie are just two random victims of the ghosts. And the four together will sort of be like puppets, listening to Mattie and Noelle while destroying things in the way. Heck, I just got that from the summary and just read through the whole chapter and that is what it feels like. Since when was I SMART? I'm the dumb blonde of my fam and school and here! And the character people up top are FUNNY! Ilthem. They are so funny XD hehe. I'm a lot like Erin! Weird...wonder what that means...oh well
Great job! XD Blake and Erin. Blake is like me because he obessess over his hair. XD
Screw guys. Give me music and dont take it away. Love-fell asleep head in clouds
XD blake and erin=cute couple ;)
11/27/2009 c1 HootsRocks1234
Hi! This is me! The same person who just reviewed! :) I just wanted to let you know I won't be able to post up the story for three days.
**everyone face-faults**
The thing is...I won't be able to because I just joined a few hours ago. Can't publish a story till two days.
I reread the chapter again! It is super good! Write more! Write more!
Olivia (alter ego): Leave the poor girl alone.
Hoots: ^^ Oh. Sorry about that!
Hi! This is me! The same person who just reviewed! :) I just wanted to let you know I won't be able to post up the story for three days.
**everyone face-faults**
The thing is...I won't be able to because I just joined a few hours ago. Can't publish a story till two days.
I reread the chapter again! It is super good! Write more! Write more!
Olivia (alter ego): Leave the poor girl alone.
Hoots: ^^ Oh. Sorry about that!
11/27/2009 c1 xXhootsXx
Oh...That's so interesting...Write more...:) I am a beginning writer ... Wanna check out my story? It'll be posted in about an hour. Update soon! It's interesting!
Oh...That's so interesting...Write more...:) I am a beginning writer ... Wanna check out my story? It'll be posted in about an hour. Update soon! It's interesting!