for The Truth11/30/2009 c1 
56Luna Turner
I like the last line and the foreshadowing it contained.
A nice spin off of Twilight for a change.
So nice to have something different in all of the vampire craze.
Nice techniques through the whole piece, that leaves the reader wanting more.
Excellent.
Yours truly,
Luna Turner
56Luna TurnerI like the last line and the foreshadowing it contained.
A nice spin off of Twilight for a change.
So nice to have something different in all of the vampire craze.
Nice techniques through the whole piece, that leaves the reader wanting more.
Excellent.
Yours truly,
Luna Turner
11/28/2009 c1 9MagicWords
Nice twist at the end. It gives it an "oh-so-not-like-twilight-twist"
And no sparkling! Yay!
Keep it up!
MagicWords
9MagicWordsNice twist at the end. It gives it an "oh-so-not-like-twilight-twist"
And no sparkling! Yay!
Keep it up!
MagicWords