for Raindrops3/22/2010 c2 Mae
Amazing :) I love it! UPDATE, please :)
Amazing :) I love it! UPDATE, please :)
1/10/2010 c2 JD Kirkland. Taurus Land
Ugh, I hated gym class too in high school. I'm surprised I passed it. Anywho, LOVED the chappy. I love Ethan. I wish she could trust him, open up to him a bit, but I understand that that could take some time. I love your writing voice, it's like you're the actual character, you know what I mean. I talk a lot. Anywho, update soon. :-)
-J.D. Kirkland, KH
Ugh, I hated gym class too in high school. I'm surprised I passed it. Anywho, LOVED the chappy. I love Ethan. I wish she could trust him, open up to him a bit, but I understand that that could take some time. I love your writing voice, it's like you're the actual character, you know what I mean. I talk a lot. Anywho, update soon. :-)
-J.D. Kirkland, KH
1/8/2010 c2 
8CatProduttore
Poor girl! I feel so bad for her! Ly! You are a wonderful writer. I wish that I could give you concrit, but it's too good!
8CatProduttorePoor girl! I feel so bad for her! Ly! You are a wonderful writer. I wish that I could give you concrit, but it's too good!
11/29/2009 c1 8CatProduttore
I love it. I don't think that it is too cliche. It is very well written. I hope you continue it!
8CatProduttoreI love it. I don't think that it is too cliche. It is very well written. I hope you continue it!
11/28/2009 c1 JD Kirkland. Taurus Land
I think it was very well written and I like it so far. It's definitely a story that people can relate to. I can't wait to see where you go with this. I'm going to stay tuned. I love Noelle and Ethan's characters also, by the way! G00d luck with this!
- J.D. Kirkland- KH
I think it was very well written and I like it so far. It's definitely a story that people can relate to. I can't wait to see where you go with this. I'm going to stay tuned. I love Noelle and Ethan's characters also, by the way! G00d luck with this!
- J.D. Kirkland- KH