for Never9/2/2014 c1 
4Clara E. Taylor
This is extremely thoughtful and honest. My story, too. I am glad He never gives up.
4Clara E. TaylorThis is extremely thoughtful and honest. My story, too. I am glad He never gives up.
11/30/2009 c1 Airlia Alala
The first paragraph i found speaks so much about people of faith and how we take so long to notice our God when we are distracted by material objects. The line "How long have you mourned me?" i found was powerful and makes one think about how god must feel about his children on eath.
I found this was a powerful, thought provoking piece of writing. Your descriptive language was very well done and made the images in this piece all the more powerful. I think that your piece of writing also reflects what every person of faith must go through or think about.
AA
The first paragraph i found speaks so much about people of faith and how we take so long to notice our God when we are distracted by material objects. The line "How long have you mourned me?" i found was powerful and makes one think about how god must feel about his children on eath.
I found this was a powerful, thought provoking piece of writing. Your descriptive language was very well done and made the images in this piece all the more powerful. I think that your piece of writing also reflects what every person of faith must go through or think about.
AA