for Sunday Mornings12/10/2009 c1 
22Mizzuz Spock
This is a cute little story, though I felt the relationship between Jun and Mato isn't clearly defined. (I mean, they're brothers, but towards the end I wasn't sure if there was a little something more going on...Were they step-brothers? Or do I just have a dirty mind?) xD
Anyways, I liked the little details you threw in. Like the cranky cat and explaining about why Mato wants revenge on Jun.
I had a question though: Why does Jun have a bunk bed in his room? Isn't that a little too much bed space? o.0
Other than that, I liked this story. It was a cute, fun read. Good job. :]
22Mizzuz SpockThis is a cute little story, though I felt the relationship between Jun and Mato isn't clearly defined. (I mean, they're brothers, but towards the end I wasn't sure if there was a little something more going on...Were they step-brothers? Or do I just have a dirty mind?) xD
Anyways, I liked the little details you threw in. Like the cranky cat and explaining about why Mato wants revenge on Jun.
I had a question though: Why does Jun have a bunk bed in his room? Isn't that a little too much bed space? o.0
Other than that, I liked this story. It was a cute, fun read. Good job. :]
12/8/2009 c1 63Ms.Sweet Pea
Reviewing twice cause your that awesome ;). -Sorry I didnt see you there on the board Now you get touble the LOVE!
63Ms.Sweet PeaReviewing twice cause your that awesome ;). -Sorry I didnt see you there on the board Now you get touble the LOVE!
12/7/2009 c1 Punslinger
This is a very nice little story and I am sure everyone who has a brother or sister can relate to it. Well written and entertaining.
This is a very nice little story and I am sure everyone who has a brother or sister can relate to it. Well written and entertaining.