1/19/2010 c1 4XxNoImaginationxX
If only it were that simple to make someone live.
Really nice poem. I really like that line:
"Following to the calm chaos
Of the unknown."
Though as it is unknown one really doesn't know what it is... if that makes sense.
Anyways... You spelt heart wrong on fifth line. And if that wasn't an error, I don't think it makes sense..
If only it were that simple to make someone live.
Really nice poem. I really like that line:
"Following to the calm chaos
Of the unknown."
Though as it is unknown one really doesn't know what it is... if that makes sense.
Anyways... You spelt heart wrong on fifth line. And if that wasn't an error, I don't think it makes sense..
12/2/2009 c1 70rolliepollie44
Beautiful flow, and an amazing build up.
I love the title, and I love how it ties in with the ending line.
Lovely work! :D
rolliepollie44
Beautiful flow, and an amazing build up.
I love the title, and I love how it ties in with the ending line.
Lovely work! :D
rolliepollie44