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2/27/2011 c1 6meli101
this is actually really good and you dont have to elaborate to make it better all you need is to refine it a bit more and add just some detail and clarify some points and this will be absolutely great. its great to see you writing.
12/3/2009 c1 Imreviewingnow
Ah! Sad it was so short, it would make a great multi-chapter story in greater detail... but certainly very interesting and way worth reading!
12/3/2009 c1 11stolenshadow23
This is good. Kind of sad, but kind of happy in a way, like it's natural and that they were both ok with the inevitable. Keep writing.

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