for Easier To Just Pretend12/4/2010 c1 tell it to the sky
you should continue with this. its got potential to go on to a bigger fic!
you should continue with this. its got potential to go on to a bigger fic!
4/22/2010 c1 writer'sblock7777
Wow, you did a great job at capturing it! It's always so tough, reading about this (I've never experienced it, thank God), because it comes on so slowly! And I think you caught that well in her attitude.
Wow, you did a great job at capturing it! It's always so tough, reading about this (I've never experienced it, thank God), because it comes on so slowly! And I think you caught that well in her attitude.
1/9/2010 c1 ilovepunks
this is a well good story. by the way baj, i've made a dumb account so i dont have to remember all of the stories in my head what arent complete and it would be easier to just check on here rather than searching everyone. im adding this one to my faves. :)
this is a well good story. by the way baj, i've made a dumb account so i dont have to remember all of the stories in my head what arent complete and it would be easier to just check on here rather than searching everyone. im adding this one to my faves. :)
12/13/2009 c1 Ivoryyy
Oh wow, thats good =) i like it =)
Oh wow, thats good =) i like it =)
12/11/2009 c1 Joy.S
okay, i tend to blabble, so i'll try to keep it as breif as possible.
first off, i love it.
update soon pls?
the few sentences were rather confusing. are you planning keeping this a oneshot or entend it?
sincerely
Joy.S xoxo
okay, i tend to blabble, so i'll try to keep it as breif as possible.
first off, i love it.
update soon pls?
the few sentences were rather confusing. are you planning keeping this a oneshot or entend it?
sincerely
Joy.S xoxo
12/8/2009 c1 Jelly Babes101
due to your self promoting I've just read your oneshot.
about Coby I just have to say:
Crazy pshyco much? (I think I spelt "pshyco" wrong...)
I think it was good. I don't read much on fictionpress so I can't really tell if you should just stick to mediator fanfics.
but I do honestly like your writing.
x]
due to your self promoting I've just read your oneshot.
about Coby I just have to say:
Crazy pshyco much? (I think I spelt "pshyco" wrong...)
I think it was good. I don't read much on fictionpress so I can't really tell if you should just stick to mediator fanfics.
but I do honestly like your writing.
x]
12/3/2009 c1 Beth
Saima! I loved it!
I loved all their names, they were so cool :)
Coby was well sweet at times but others obviously not.
Aw i'd love a best friend like Todd, Coby was a bit silly not trusting her :)
Anyway, I loved it!
Ly
x
Saima! I loved it!
I loved all their names, they were so cool :)
Coby was well sweet at times but others obviously not.
Aw i'd love a best friend like Todd, Coby was a bit silly not trusting her :)
Anyway, I loved it!
Ly
x
12/3/2009 c1 
1AllTimeLaura
I really enjoyed this! I felt Taylor really came through to me and was easy to relate to. Awesome job! :)
1AllTimeLauraI really enjoyed this! I felt Taylor really came through to me and was easy to relate to. Awesome job! :)