for Shattered Dreams8/9/2011 c33 
6EmmaWoodhouse88
I really hope he doesn't end up being a disappointment. I can't wait to see what happens next!
6EmmaWoodhouse88I really hope he doesn't end up being a disappointment. I can't wait to see what happens next!
8/8/2011 c32 KristenWenst68
I dont have a favorite chapter, becuz I LOVE THE WHOLE THING! I cried and smiled. You writing is beautiful! I cant wait for the next chapter~
I dont have a favorite chapter, becuz I LOVE THE WHOLE THING! I cried and smiled. You writing is beautiful! I cant wait for the next chapter~
8/7/2011 c32 4Frozen Doll
Ive been reading this story for a couple days straight depending on my internet access. And ive grown attached to these characters. I loved the prince and princess together but it also makes you thinnk back to what Mone said. He is controlling her life. This is a great story :)
4Frozen DollIve been reading this story for a couple days straight depending on my internet access. And ive grown attached to these characters. I loved the prince and princess together but it also makes you thinnk back to what Mone said. He is controlling her life. This is a great story :)
8/3/2011 c32 6EmmaWoodhouse88
Not expected! Ahh. They finally win and then end up losing each other. That's so wrong! I can't wait to see what happens next!
6EmmaWoodhouse88Not expected! Ahh. They finally win and then end up losing each other. That's so wrong! I can't wait to see what happens next!
8/3/2011 c32 Kelly Rogala
Im with Eloise, I wouldn't want everything handed to me. She's been through hell and back, I can see why she'd want to do things on her own. But I do feel bad for Jared, he's only trying to help. I love this story and will be sad when it ends. You are a great writer!
Im with Eloise, I wouldn't want everything handed to me. She's been through hell and back, I can see why she'd want to do things on her own. But I do feel bad for Jared, he's only trying to help. I love this story and will be sad when it ends. You are a great writer!
8/3/2011 c32 112SmashedIce.X
I was so happy about that verdict! :)
I think the break up was kinda expected actually. Eloise definately needs to stand on her own two feet for awhile, Jared does sort of interfere a lot. I know he's trying to help her, but I just think she needs to live by herself properly. Hope she gets her book published!
112SmashedIce.XI was so happy about that verdict! :)
I think the break up was kinda expected actually. Eloise definately needs to stand on her own two feet for awhile, Jared does sort of interfere a lot. I know he's trying to help her, but I just think she needs to live by herself properly. Hope she gets her book published!
8/3/2011 c32 Brownteapots
nooooooo! but understandable I suppose, but doesn't mean I am happy about it. Good chapter, can't wait till the next one to see where you take this story :D
nooooooo! but understandable I suppose, but doesn't mean I am happy about it. Good chapter, can't wait till the next one to see where you take this story :D
8/2/2011 c32 39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
YAY! He's gone to gaol and now Eloise is safe :)
Loved this chapter but the only complaint I have was the arguement. In my opinion, I found it a little too calm for a break up-but that's only my opinion.
Still enjoyed the chapter though. Please update soon :)
39Raaawr Ima DinosaurYAY! He's gone to gaol and now Eloise is safe :)
Loved this chapter but the only complaint I have was the arguement. In my opinion, I found it a little too calm for a break up-but that's only my opinion.
Still enjoyed the chapter though. Please update soon :)
8/1/2011 c31 Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
NOOO! Cliffy's are bad...although, I do enjoy using them in my stories :)
Great chapter! I loved it.
Please update soon ASAP! :D
NOOO! Cliffy's are bad...although, I do enjoy using them in my stories :)
Great chapter! I loved it.
Please update soon ASAP! :D
8/1/2011 c31 choc me
Oh another cliffhanger! should expect nothing less from u ;)
I like how Eloise has grown and how much stronger she is now...Jared does have a big flaw actually! He can be totally clueless sometimes and then spends his time saying how sorry he is! Men...pffft
OK then an update in a few days...! yay!
Oh another cliffhanger! should expect nothing less from u ;)
I like how Eloise has grown and how much stronger she is now...Jared does have a big flaw actually! He can be totally clueless sometimes and then spends his time saying how sorry he is! Men...pffft
OK then an update in a few days...! yay!
8/1/2011 c31 6EmmaWoodhouse88
I hope he is found guilty. Otherwise it could be hard for the story to end in just a few chapters. I can't wait to see what happens next!
6EmmaWoodhouse88I hope he is found guilty. Otherwise it could be hard for the story to end in just a few chapters. I can't wait to see what happens next!
8/1/2011 c31 Kelly Rogala
Wow what a way to end the chapter! So not fair! Can't wait for the next chapter.
What happened to Nadine's testimony? Did I read it and forget? Lol
Wow what a way to end the chapter! So not fair! Can't wait for the next chapter.
What happened to Nadine's testimony? Did I read it and forget? Lol