for Shattered Dreams8/1/2011 c31 
112SmashedIce.X
And an even bigger cliffhanger! I have an idea about whether he'll be found guilty or not, I do hope there's a happy ending!
I didn't notice the fairy tale parts had stopped, but I guess it could mean that Eloise is finally living her fairy tale and not dreaming about it anymore, or something. :)
112SmashedIce.XAnd an even bigger cliffhanger! I have an idea about whether he'll be found guilty or not, I do hope there's a happy ending!
I didn't notice the fairy tale parts had stopped, but I guess it could mean that Eloise is finally living her fairy tale and not dreaming about it anymore, or something. :)
8/1/2011 c31 isammeh
Cliffhanger! I'm so eager for the next chapter now. It amazes me how much I hate a fictional character. Great job.
Cliffhanger! I'm so eager for the next chapter now. It amazes me how much I hate a fictional character. Great job.
7/31/2011 c30 Tanya Ray
I'd actually pretty much given up hope on FP. I stopped reading years ago, only going to PH to read. But I randomly came to the site and went through pages, looking for something interesting and saw this story.I read the whole thing at one go, and i love it. It's very, very well written. I love how you've portrayed her issues so realistically and in such detail. I'm a little wary of how perfect Jared seems to be, but I assume you've got something up your sleeve about him?
Also, i LOVE the quotes you use every chapter. Very inspiring.
I'd actually pretty much given up hope on FP. I stopped reading years ago, only going to PH to read. But I randomly came to the site and went through pages, looking for something interesting and saw this story.I read the whole thing at one go, and i love it. It's very, very well written. I love how you've portrayed her issues so realistically and in such detail. I'm a little wary of how perfect Jared seems to be, but I assume you've got something up your sleeve about him?
Also, i LOVE the quotes you use every chapter. Very inspiring.
7/29/2011 c30 39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
I've totally fallen in love with this story. I started reading it a few day's ago and just found time to finish reading the available chapters. This was an amazing chapter and the emotion was exactly right. I have to know what happens next! Please update asap!
39Raaawr Ima DinosaurI've totally fallen in love with this story. I started reading it a few day's ago and just found time to finish reading the available chapters. This was an amazing chapter and the emotion was exactly right. I have to know what happens next! Please update asap!
7/27/2011 c5 isammeh
oh man. This chapter was great. This story is so captivating, i'm hooked. I love everything about it. So far it's better than any of the books i've bought from a store.
oh man. This chapter was great. This story is so captivating, i'm hooked. I love everything about it. So far it's better than any of the books i've bought from a store.
7/27/2011 c30 6EmmaWoodhouse88
To bad they don't have the names of te guys that were in the apartment with Troy for that time so they could prove that Jared was innocent and Troy was guilty. I can't wait to see what happens next!
6EmmaWoodhouse88To bad they don't have the names of te guys that were in the apartment with Troy for that time so they could prove that Jared was innocent and Troy was guilty. I can't wait to see what happens next!
7/27/2011 c30 WynterLight
Oh yay! I'm so glad you updated!
I love how Eloise is becoming stronger as a person, and not just a weak female pawn to the strong, charming male lead in the story. As much as I hated the defense attorney, I know all too often this is how things would be in reality. I can't wait to read more - I'm excited to see how this all works out. And when you are all done, I am totally going to read this all over again from the beginning.
Oh yay! I'm so glad you updated!
I love how Eloise is becoming stronger as a person, and not just a weak female pawn to the strong, charming male lead in the story. As much as I hated the defense attorney, I know all too often this is how things would be in reality. I can't wait to read more - I'm excited to see how this all works out. And when you are all done, I am totally going to read this all over again from the beginning.
7/27/2011 c30 112SmashedIce.X
Hi! I think this is a bigger cliffhanger, I'm desperate to know what happens when Eloise is questioned. Looking forward to reading the next chapter! :)
112SmashedIce.XHi! I think this is a bigger cliffhanger, I'm desperate to know what happens when Eloise is questioned. Looking forward to reading the next chapter! :)
7/26/2011 c30 choc me
oooohh another cliffhanger! Another great update...hpe to read mre soon..
my only criticism is that you wrote: "Today I will face the Dragon and I will win...Since Jared was supposed to testify the day before, he will be the first person to stand." Instead of "will" it should've been "would" i think. because ur narration is in the past tense.
oooohh another cliffhanger! Another great update...hpe to read mre soon..
my only criticism is that you wrote: "Today I will face the Dragon and I will win...Since Jared was supposed to testify the day before, he will be the first person to stand." Instead of "will" it should've been "would" i think. because ur narration is in the past tense.
7/26/2011 c30 Kelly Rogala
I think this is a better cliffy then the last chapter because I can't wait to see what happens! Update soon please!
I think this is a better cliffy then the last chapter because I can't wait to see what happens! Update soon please!
7/21/2011 c28 1hollywood920
Can I just say that you are one talented writer? This was so scary and dark, but it was so good and truthful! It, like all of your stories is captivating and just plain good! I think you should update your stories whenever you can!
1hollywood920Can I just say that you are one talented writer? This was so scary and dark, but it was so good and truthful! It, like all of your stories is captivating and just plain good! I think you should update your stories whenever you can!