for Shattered Dreams3/17/2013 c3 
6Deeper than Fathomless
Awful, just awful. I wish I could cry, but I can't. Why am I not crying? I hope you weren't affected by any abuse or rape. You seem to write the heartbreaking details precisely as I imagined.
I am blaming your well-written story for my unfinished homework! Hopefully my chef won't mind. ;)
6Deeper than FathomlessAwful, just awful. I wish I could cry, but I can't. Why am I not crying? I hope you weren't affected by any abuse or rape. You seem to write the heartbreaking details precisely as I imagined.
I am blaming your well-written story for my unfinished homework! Hopefully my chef won't mind. ;)
3/17/2013 c2 Deeper than Fathomless
It's very different for an evil step mother to assist the girl she had forsakened and abused. I assumed you would move foward with a plot similar to the orginal Disney Cinderella story. Oh, well! It was a unexpected twisit! It was engaging.
Again, you have done it! The characters have very distinct personailties, and it amazes how each character has a different dialect.
Deeper than Fathomless
It's very different for an evil step mother to assist the girl she had forsakened and abused. I assumed you would move foward with a plot similar to the orginal Disney Cinderella story. Oh, well! It was a unexpected twisit! It was engaging.
Again, you have done it! The characters have very distinct personailties, and it amazes how each character has a different dialect.
Deeper than Fathomless
3/17/2013 c1 Deeper than Fathomless
I don't think it was fast; to be honest, I thought a new chapter was going to start immediately after that man... Curse you, Cassandra! How could you write this!? I literally read this while looking between my fingers, like a horror movie! Heartless, you!
Okay, don't start crying or anything. I am just very disturbed by Eloise's story. I want to continue reading but trafficking is one topic on my long list that I oppose...
Seems to be a good start for your story. I hope it continues... Curse you, again!
I don't think it was fast; to be honest, I thought a new chapter was going to start immediately after that man... Curse you, Cassandra! How could you write this!? I literally read this while looking between my fingers, like a horror movie! Heartless, you!
Okay, don't start crying or anything. I am just very disturbed by Eloise's story. I want to continue reading but trafficking is one topic on my long list that I oppose...
Seems to be a good start for your story. I hope it continues... Curse you, again!
3/4/2013 c37 Guest
AWWW! I loved it! It was so good, the drama the sadness, I just wanted to hug everyone that was sad... Accept Troy. Never Troy.
But I'm glad she got her amazing ending, she deserved it. I thought it was going to end badly and them never really be together, but I'm glad I was wrong. I LOVED IT!
The mix of Fairy tales and quotes and the little story kinda thing at the begining was really well put together and it was all just so inspiring as well. I loved the quotes!
AWWW! I loved it! It was so good, the drama the sadness, I just wanted to hug everyone that was sad... Accept Troy. Never Troy.
But I'm glad she got her amazing ending, she deserved it. I thought it was going to end badly and them never really be together, but I'm glad I was wrong. I LOVED IT!
The mix of Fairy tales and quotes and the little story kinda thing at the begining was really well put together and it was all just so inspiring as well. I loved the quotes!
1/22/2013 c5 3The Beauty of Lies
I will someday, somehow, finish reading this story. But not today. It is too hard, too painful, to read in one sitting, but i tried, i truly truly did. This is well written, and it speaks volumes that someone as well accustomed to the cruelties of life has to stop and take a breather from the... Well, storyline. I was hoping for a quick rescue from the prince, i was hoping that first night she'd blurt out everything but chapter 4 rolled by and im afraid what chapter 5 has, i fear it's something awful, something that will make my eyes burn and heart swell in anger at the unfairness of it all! ... I guess maybe as a reader, i need that happy ending more than the characters themselves. I read, to find a sense of good in the world. Childish, simplistic and downright silly, considering the sort of world we all live in, but... Still. I find that angst, horror, drama stories, while good, are meant to be savored bit by bit, not gobbled up whole. So ill do that... Im not sure why im reviewing in the middle of a finished story, but. XD well, i felt i had to.
3The Beauty of LiesI will someday, somehow, finish reading this story. But not today. It is too hard, too painful, to read in one sitting, but i tried, i truly truly did. This is well written, and it speaks volumes that someone as well accustomed to the cruelties of life has to stop and take a breather from the... Well, storyline. I was hoping for a quick rescue from the prince, i was hoping that first night she'd blurt out everything but chapter 4 rolled by and im afraid what chapter 5 has, i fear it's something awful, something that will make my eyes burn and heart swell in anger at the unfairness of it all! ... I guess maybe as a reader, i need that happy ending more than the characters themselves. I read, to find a sense of good in the world. Childish, simplistic and downright silly, considering the sort of world we all live in, but... Still. I find that angst, horror, drama stories, while good, are meant to be savored bit by bit, not gobbled up whole. So ill do that... Im not sure why im reviewing in the middle of a finished story, but. XD well, i felt i had to.
1/9/2013 c37 4Gothic-innocence16
Ok first off this story is so awesome, its one of my favorites its really good. At first I thought that troy would be coming back to seek revenge but , when it didnt happen I was sorta surprised because it usually turns out like that. However, the ending was good but I was thinking that she would get pregnant.
Furthermore, I really love this story. Good luck on more like it.
4Gothic-innocence16Ok first off this story is so awesome, its one of my favorites its really good. At first I thought that troy would be coming back to seek revenge but , when it didnt happen I was sorta surprised because it usually turns out like that. However, the ending was good but I was thinking that she would get pregnant.
Furthermore, I really love this story. Good luck on more like it.
12/14/2012 c37 1macy8
omg that was one of the best endings in a book ever! for a sec i was scared about jerad and her because of their year long break up but omg i am finished
1macy8omg that was one of the best endings in a book ever! for a sec i was scared about jerad and her because of their year long break up but omg i am finished
10/22/2012 c37 Guest
So beautiful! Had to read this in one setting (Meaning i get 3 hours of sleep tonight ) It was just THAT good!
So beautiful! Had to read this in one setting (Meaning i get 3 hours of sleep tonight ) It was just THAT good!
9/30/2012 c35 23rd Bookworm
It was her step mum what's her name...
Ugh I can't remember anyway it was her
23rd BookwormIt was her step mum what's her name...
Ugh I can't remember anyway it was her
9/30/2012 c10 3rd Bookworm
Not really, Troy is a bastard, but he's smart, he made sure he would never have to spend the money on an abortion again.
I love your story by the way.
Not really, Troy is a bastard, but he's smart, he made sure he would never have to spend the money on an abortion again.
I love your story by the way.
9/29/2012 c37 B
I love that song!
So I will dance with Cinderella, while she is here in my arm, because I knew something the prince never knew, oh I will dance with Cinderella, I don't wanna miss even one song! :) PErfect ending song! Your Not Alone by Meredith Andrews is another really good one, but so is Can't Get Over You by Anthem Lights. Loved your story, friend!
I love that song!
So I will dance with Cinderella, while she is here in my arm, because I knew something the prince never knew, oh I will dance with Cinderella, I don't wanna miss even one song! :) PErfect ending song! Your Not Alone by Meredith Andrews is another really good one, but so is Can't Get Over You by Anthem Lights. Loved your story, friend!
9/16/2012 c37 tenko
Thank you for this beautiful story
It was so beautifully written
And im so happy that she had an ending she deserved
Thank you for this beautiful story
It was so beautifully written
And im so happy that she had an ending she deserved
8/22/2012 c37 3HalfwayParanoid
I cried the further I got into this. I am still crying now. It was a beautiful story that I may not read for a good few months again becuase of how heart wrenching and sad it is. I loved it, and to say, I have never cried to one story minus 'Where the Red Fern Grows', in all my life. That is a great accomplishment.
Your writting was great and you never left out one detail throughout the entire plot. I commend you on that. Also, no spelling errors or grammar errors were found (sighs with relief). I have quit reading so many stories due to that one problem. All in all, it was heart-breakingly beautiful.
3HalfwayParanoidI cried the further I got into this. I am still crying now. It was a beautiful story that I may not read for a good few months again becuase of how heart wrenching and sad it is. I loved it, and to say, I have never cried to one story minus 'Where the Red Fern Grows', in all my life. That is a great accomplishment.
Your writting was great and you never left out one detail throughout the entire plot. I commend you on that. Also, no spelling errors or grammar errors were found (sighs with relief). I have quit reading so many stories due to that one problem. All in all, it was heart-breakingly beautiful.