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2/13/2010 c1 14Reason-Flower
Nice. I often find myself thinking about time, and wondering how it works, and so on, so I like to read about it. You've brought up some interesting points.
1/6/2010 c1 8sealednectar
This is true. When I think about time this deeply, I hate it. I always end up feeling sad because we're all going to die one day and does anything really matter? I don't know. I love the shape of the poem. Pretty. I can see the sands of time trickling down.
12/23/2009 c1 38Sergei V
Wow, very good insight into time. I like it. Very Analytical thinking here.
12/14/2009 c1 28howdylv08
Actually, this made me think about our perception of time. Nice one. You totally should have made the shape an hourglass, though teehee

Sophie :3
12/14/2009 c1 1Love Frog
So, so true. Love it! :) I have a poem about time, too.
12/8/2009 c1 37I am Lyhegnot
I spent time reading this.

But it was GOOD time! :]

-ponders- Is the poem supposed to be shaped like a Christmas ornament?
12/7/2009 c1 119Whisper on the Lips
i like the shape and feel of this poem. it looks like a pendulum. very awesome. Write on!
12/6/2009 c1 13Ulquiorra9000
Good perspective on time, considering the past, present, and future. I like how you say that terms of the future and present are dynamic, but the current past gets only further behind us. That part really completes the feeling of time in this poem and makes it have more feeling. I noticed the shape of the poem's wording and wondered if it's supposed to look like something or not... a concrete poem? It actually kind of looks like a Christmas ornament to me, but I'm sure that that's not really the case =P
12/6/2009 c1 fleur de l'est
A nice thought :) I've always found it weird how the future will always become the past, and what I dread or anticipate today will be reminisced about years later. Well done for giving it a perfect shape as well :P
12/5/2009 c1 5phlegmsoda
I love the finality of the last line, though this poem was a teeny bit cliche.
12/5/2009 c1 59Casino Kat
this one is really good. (: you should deffinately keep up the great work!
12/5/2009 c1 81Princess-anna57
Good job here. I like this poem a lot. Keep it up!

~Anna~ ^_^

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