for Walls3/20/2010 c1 
82steffxnie
'Not even truth in wine, no matter how many drink' Ah, I like how you put this. This is a nice piece to read.
82steffxnie'Not even truth in wine, no matter how many drink' Ah, I like how you put this. This is a nice piece to read.
1/28/2010 c1 62Kiwi-kiwi6
I really like the first and last paragraphs. The last line in the second verse seems a trifle forced. Cheesy. Does that make sense? Other than that, the poem is very good.
62Kiwi-kiwi6I really like the first and last paragraphs. The last line in the second verse seems a trifle forced. Cheesy. Does that make sense? Other than that, the poem is very good.