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9/8/2016 c1 Guest
oh my this was amazing. i really enjoyed the writing style here and can't wait to read the full story when it's out! please do post the link somewhere :3
11/27/2011 c1 2khristiya
I love it. Such a wonderful story. I do hope you'd continue it so we'd get to know more about them, especially Christian or whoever he is. Amazingly done! The way you ended it was nice and practically nerve wracking with all the possibilities and thoughts left hanging, in a beautiful way. But please! Do us a favor and do continue!
12/10/2010 c1 4bookwormhottie
What in the world! How can u end it like that? Who is he? What does he do? Will they end up together?

This was so different from what I'm use to reading and the idea was really original. I just really wish u had completed it.
5/30/2010 c1 12Aderyn Azula
Woah, wait- what? That's it? Wow. Ok, that was seriously amazing. I lovelovelove it! There was so much intrigue, and mystery and I want more! of course it's more effectve because of the ending but boy do i want more about them!
12/27/2009 c1 Artume
I absolutely love this story! It has a very unique and intriguing plot. I really hope you decide to continue this - I would love to read more about Beth and Charles/Christian. Please? :) That said, your story flows really well. There are no awkward grammar/spelling mistakes, and the first time I read this story, I was literally blown away! Congrats!
12/14/2009 c1 sunshine423
as always, love your stories. im intrigued by the story any chance of continuation?
12/9/2009 c1 Anon
WOW. WOW. I loved it.

You have officially compelled me to review - I have never done that before, not even for my most fav stories. I'm sorry you're looking for critique, but this story is wonderful is all I can say! I just read it again - first was yest.

Will you be writing more about these two? I love the ending, in all its vague glory. My interpretation - he loves her as well, right? Only, he shows that under the pretence of his disguise. And he gives that disguise his real name, to show that it *is* real.

Right, ramble over. I would really love it if you continued this story. Lovely idea, and EXTREMELY well written, Well Done! I was disappointed to see you have no other story that is as long as this one (I didn't read any other...)

Can I say it again? WONDERFUL. I love it so much. ^^
12/8/2009 c1 18LeenaAmara
I have to say...I read the first paragraph and I was suspicious of how this was going to go. But boy oh boy am I intrigued now! Marvelous!
12/8/2009 c1 3GirlWithTheDancingCherryTrees
F* loved it! Wow it was amazing. I wished there was more but it seems perfect as a one shot too... :/ Anyways I enjoyed the read a lot!
12/8/2009 c1 Zero Serenity
not bad =] it was a change from what you normally write, and that made it really cool. is this just a one shot? it's nicely rounded and could end here, but it does make a person wonder about the two's future ^.~

saw two typos, they looked like the sort where you started to type something, then stopped and wrote something else, but you forgot to delete a word. i think it was in the part where you were listing the days she was waiting for him, or just after, but i was too absorbed to mark it

hope you're doing good, and that you're holiday was good (if you celebrated it) and that your december is a good one! ^_^

~Zero
12/8/2009 c1 3bunnypopcorn
Wow, that was great. Very well-written :3
12/8/2009 c1 14Sapphyre Nymph
this was very intriguing..

i liked it..
12/8/2009 c1 20Raingypsy
Hey.

I really loved this first chapter and can't wait for the next one!

Very intriguing, great work :)
12/8/2009 c1 CaitlinEA
Awe, i really like it. Couldnt you have made it longer? Or at least made it into a story.

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