for Loving the Beast8/27/2012 c9 Guest
Her broken rib recovery seemed to fast. Just so ya know.
Her broken rib recovery seemed to fast. Just so ya know.
8/27/2012 c6 Guest
Wow twilight sceen
Wow twilight sceen
9/2/2010 c10 foxyricanlady
great story just finish reading what you have post so far and i really really like it. hope you update soon... ok but i need to know it shane a werewolf too?
great story just finish reading what you have post so far and i really really like it. hope you update soon... ok but i need to know it shane a werewolf too?
6/25/2010 c1 BluE MooN CRUM
I feel disappointed with this story... you shouldn't destroy Shane by making him an abusive boyfriend just because you want us to feel that what Jessi is doing with L is right...
I feel disappointed with this story... you shouldn't destroy Shane by making him an abusive boyfriend just because you want us to feel that what Jessi is doing with L is right...
6/21/2010 c5 
3I licka da penis
I relly did like the story, but just one minor thing. Add to it!
The story is not long enough and I want to find out what happens next.
But all in all, good.
Signed
XxDeadSoulxX
3I licka da penisI relly did like the story, but just one minor thing. Add to it!
The story is not long enough and I want to find out what happens next.
But all in all, good.
Signed
XxDeadSoulxX
12/20/2009 c4 8Darkened-By-Choice
OMG!
Im loving it.
I can't wait to read more.
Love the people in your story as well... though i am confused what grades are everybody in?
Can't wait to see how L fits into the story, will he take shane's place or will she never even date him...
Though i know he could never take shanes place. EVER!
:) again can not wait to read more :)
With luck on your next chapter,
Darkened
8Darkened-By-ChoiceOMG!
Im loving it.
I can't wait to read more.
Love the people in your story as well... though i am confused what grades are everybody in?
Can't wait to see how L fits into the story, will he take shane's place or will she never even date him...
Though i know he could never take shanes place. EVER!
:) again can not wait to read more :)
With luck on your next chapter,
Darkened
12/13/2009 c4 1Sunshine In A Box
okay
i like it but its not one of your best ones
hurry up and write another
JESSI!
1Sunshine In A Boxokay
i like it but its not one of your best ones
hurry up and write another
JESSI!
12/12/2009 c3 Sunshine In A Box
wait a secound jess is this based on true events? i mean this chapter with the new guy ? SPILL I LOVE IT
wait a secound jess is this based on true events? i mean this chapter with the new guy ? SPILL I LOVE IT
12/12/2009 c2 Sunshine In A Box
okay jess i have to admit i love the crotch rocket but i lovre how you make me seem like a whore yeah their not dating but she's going to just make out with zach lol jk i love it and i luv ya me
okay jess i have to admit i love the crotch rocket but i lovre how you make me seem like a whore yeah their not dating but she's going to just make out with zach lol jk i love it and i luv ya me
12/12/2009 c2 5fr3nchi3
Yay another chappie! oh btw just sent you another PM
I loved that little sailor bit! even though it sounded a little cheesy, but then again what is romance without the cheesiness? gotta love that
when I was reading through this I actually said, "Woah, this chick loves cars..." I'm not really much of a car person myself, but wow...I actually had a guy friend, who I hung out with after school, and we would walk home together. We would pass the parking lot where cars were being sold...and then my guy friend would take about two hours just looking at those cars...ahaha sadly...he moved away last month...and I miss him..
can't wait till you update!
-fr3nchi3
5fr3nchi3Yay another chappie! oh btw just sent you another PM
I loved that little sailor bit! even though it sounded a little cheesy, but then again what is romance without the cheesiness? gotta love that
when I was reading through this I actually said, "Woah, this chick loves cars..." I'm not really much of a car person myself, but wow...I actually had a guy friend, who I hung out with after school, and we would walk home together. We would pass the parking lot where cars were being sold...and then my guy friend would take about two hours just looking at those cars...ahaha sadly...he moved away last month...and I miss him..
can't wait till you update!
-fr3nchi3
12/9/2009 c1 8Darkened-By-Choice
AW it's so adorable... kinda reminds me off...NVM
Can not wait to read more...
8Darkened-By-ChoiceAW it's so adorable... kinda reminds me off...NVM
Can not wait to read more...
12/8/2009 c1 5fr3nchi3
Hi! I just wanted to say, nice start in this story...although I'm used to starting with characters who hate each other and then fall in love. You start immediately in the loving part.
I have to say when I was reading the summaries, I scanned through yours and saw the word MARINE! and it just screamed at me...okay so I just have a few questions:
What type of school is Jessi in? like high school or college?
How old is Shane?
Do you know main key words used only by the military?
srry I'm bothering you with these...but I'm a military brat in the NJROTC program and I don't want this story to fail on military info...yes the upper two questions have to deal with the military...
and I sorry if I offend you and that you are a military brat or something...but if you're not I could give you some facts about the military. just PM me anytime...
but overall VERY, VERY good start! I actually smiled when Jessi said "No sex." well all those words summarised into two.
oh btw...I'm kind've a favorite reviewer to some authors (not meaning to be cocky) but I made it a habit to make my reviews longer than the average: "I like your story keep up the good work!" I hope I didn't annoy you! XD
5fr3nchi3Hi! I just wanted to say, nice start in this story...although I'm used to starting with characters who hate each other and then fall in love. You start immediately in the loving part.
I have to say when I was reading the summaries, I scanned through yours and saw the word MARINE! and it just screamed at me...okay so I just have a few questions:
What type of school is Jessi in? like high school or college?
How old is Shane?
Do you know main key words used only by the military?
srry I'm bothering you with these...but I'm a military brat in the NJROTC program and I don't want this story to fail on military info...yes the upper two questions have to deal with the military...
and I sorry if I offend you and that you are a military brat or something...but if you're not I could give you some facts about the military. just PM me anytime...
but overall VERY, VERY good start! I actually smiled when Jessi said "No sex." well all those words summarised into two.
oh btw...I'm kind've a favorite reviewer to some authors (not meaning to be cocky) but I made it a habit to make my reviews longer than the average: "I like your story keep up the good work!" I hope I didn't annoy you! XD