5/2/2010 c1 11DiexGaaf
Love, for wanting to protect, but if the other loves them as much, evil for taking their love away from them. But it was good! :)

1/9/2010 c1 XInternetsXBitchX
aw so sweet and so sad. Almost made me cry. (hear that peeps almost!)

12/13/2009 c1 21The Indifferent Voice of Youth
This is a beautiful poem. Very sad, very loving, very intriguing. What prompted you to write it? What do you imagine the speaker saying, hearing and going that no human should? I truly enjoyed this. There were a few spelling/grammatical things though.

1) "Or am I running my only chance of happiness" Shouldn't running be ruining?

2) "That your useless" Instead of 'your' it should be 'you're' as an abbreviation for 'you are'

3) Even when I cant love you Cant should become can't with an apostrophe, as an abbreviation for 'can not', otherwise it becomes a different word altogether

12/9/2009 c1 1DandylionWishes
Why does this remind me a bit of New Moon and what's going throught Edwards head? Oh well, must just be me.

12/8/2009 c1 3bunnypopcorn
Wow, that was amazing. Very well-written :P.

12/8/2009 c1 37I am Lyhegnot
Ooh, lovely. The debate that has gone on since before the world began.

Only suggestion: In the 14th line from the end, 'cant' needs an apostrophe.

Wonderful job!