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5/2/2010 c1 11DiexGaaf
Love, for wanting to protect, but if the other loves them as much, evil for taking their love away from them. But it was good! :)
1/28/2010 c1 69xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo
*applauds* I really liked this, good job :D
1/9/2010 c1 XInternetsXBitchX
aw so sweet and so sad. Almost made me cry. (hear that peeps almost!)
12/13/2009 c1 11Kuyoko
Omg, another great one! ;.; I started crying a lil... [sniff]
12/13/2009 c1 21The Indifferent Voice of Youth
This is a beautiful poem. Very sad, very loving, very intriguing. What prompted you to write it? What do you imagine the speaker saying, hearing and going that no human should? I truly enjoyed this. There were a few spelling/grammatical things though.

1) "Or am I running my only chance of happiness" Shouldn't running be ruining?

2) "That your useless" Instead of 'your' it should be 'you're' as an abbreviation for 'you are'

3) Even when I cant love you Cant should become can't with an apostrophe, as an abbreviation for 'can not', otherwise it becomes a different word altogether
12/10/2009 c1 23PoetBaby
this is great.

sacraficing and not telling the one u love, that you love them, so they will b protected.

sad. but oh so loving.
12/9/2009 c1 1DandylionWishes
Why does this remind me a bit of New Moon and what's going throught Edwards head? Oh well, must just be me.
12/8/2009 c1 8gemma5472
This is a really nice poem! I loved reading it :) Keep up the nice work
12/8/2009 c1 3bunnypopcorn
Wow, that was amazing. Very well-written :P.
12/8/2009 c1 4kacysparrow
aww i found this one really sad! it reminds me of what went on with me and my ex lol

very well done hun this was great!

lo0ves ya x
12/8/2009 c1 37I am Lyhegnot
Ooh, lovely. The debate that has gone on since before the world began.

Only suggestion: In the 14th line from the end, 'cant' needs an apostrophe.

Wonderful job!

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