
9/27/2013 c16 Jo
I'm so glad you're still writing this! It's such an engaging story and it makes me really emotionally involved and gahh it's just great and sexy and funny and interesting! You're doing a brilliant job and I can't wait to see what happens next! I'll stop fangirling now, keep up the good work :
I'm so glad you're still writing this! It's such an engaging story and it makes me really emotionally involved and gahh it's just great and sexy and funny and interesting! You're doing a brilliant job and I can't wait to see what happens next! I'll stop fangirling now, keep up the good work :
9/26/2013 c16 Fade
oMG! I was so happy to see that you updated I literally let out a scream of happiness. I did not see any typos at all but that was probably because I was so focused on the story. I am so scared for Rory if that fight with Henry does happen. Asdjkhsdflkahf I just love everything so much. I can't wait to see what happens next!
oMG! I was so happy to see that you updated I literally let out a scream of happiness. I did not see any typos at all but that was probably because I was so focused on the story. I am so scared for Rory if that fight with Henry does happen. Asdjkhsdflkahf I just love everything so much. I can't wait to see what happens next!
9/26/2013 c16
8TinaLouise
Interesting developments in this chapter. I hope the next one comes quickly. *offers cookies and hot chocolate as incentives*

Interesting developments in this chapter. I hope the next one comes quickly. *offers cookies and hot chocolate as incentives*
9/25/2013 c16
3Megsi
So glad you updated! Shit's getting intense, witches and vampires and missing wolves and how the hell is Rory going to deal with Henry?!
Also, I can't wait for Rory and Piper to get together. I realise how important Soren is, he kind of shows that Rory does have a choice and I guess probably makes him somewhat in control that he can at least choose who he likes and goes out with, but I just think Soren is a little bitch and Piper suits him better.

So glad you updated! Shit's getting intense, witches and vampires and missing wolves and how the hell is Rory going to deal with Henry?!
Also, I can't wait for Rory and Piper to get together. I realise how important Soren is, he kind of shows that Rory does have a choice and I guess probably makes him somewhat in control that he can at least choose who he likes and goes out with, but I just think Soren is a little bitch and Piper suits him better.
9/25/2013 c16
1Teddii Rebelde
I almost fainted when I saw the update in my mail. I thought that you had given up on this story, thanks for updating!

I almost fainted when I saw the update in my mail. I thought that you had given up on this story, thanks for updating!
9/25/2013 c16
5ramblingrobin
I loved that he was man enough to know when he needed a mom-hug. Thanks for the update! I look forward to the next chapters!

I loved that he was man enough to know when he needed a mom-hug. Thanks for the update! I look forward to the next chapters!
9/25/2013 c16 Guest
Omg... U updated. So happy. Rory and Piper on the outs- I don't like that but hopefully that will be rectified soon . I really think they are good for each other so I can't wait until the kinks are worked out. Please update soon.
Omg... U updated. So happy. Rory and Piper on the outs- I don't like that but hopefully that will be rectified soon . I really think they are good for each other so I can't wait until the kinks are worked out. Please update soon.
9/25/2013 c16
1Sundavar
Yay, update! Thank you for posting this! I am very excited to see what happens next!

Yay, update! Thank you for posting this! I am very excited to see what happens next!
9/25/2013 c16 Guest
New chappy! Woohoo! I love your writing.
New chappy! Woohoo! I love your writing.
9/25/2013 c1 Cj Quinn
OH MY GOD SHINY THINGS?! Loved this. I like seeing things from spazy peoples POV XD
OH MY GOD SHINY THINGS?! Loved this. I like seeing things from spazy peoples POV XD
9/18/2013 c14
6Jill Montino
I have already left a review for the last chapter, but I just have to say (in Soren's defense, sorta) that I feel it is so, so important that Rory gets to choose for himself. I mean, if you read into a bit , you can clearly see how much he's hurting just because he's never been able to make his own decisions. He's learnt to live with it, but the main theme in his thoughtsis how much he wants to make his own decisions, choose what he wants to do without being told that it's wrong/bad/etc. I mean, the kid doesn't even like being a werewolf!
And now Piper comes barging in, and the universe has already decided that he and Rory should be together. Slam-bam-your-opinion-does-not-matter-ma'am. It's not healthy. It's not Piper's fault at all, but the fact that Rory really likes Soren without any outer interference should be enough for more people to root for him :)

I have already left a review for the last chapter, but I just have to say (in Soren's defense, sorta) that I feel it is so, so important that Rory gets to choose for himself. I mean, if you read into a bit , you can clearly see how much he's hurting just because he's never been able to make his own decisions. He's learnt to live with it, but the main theme in his thoughtsis how much he wants to make his own decisions, choose what he wants to do without being told that it's wrong/bad/etc. I mean, the kid doesn't even like being a werewolf!
And now Piper comes barging in, and the universe has already decided that he and Rory should be together. Slam-bam-your-opinion-does-not-matter-ma'am. It's not healthy. It's not Piper's fault at all, but the fact that Rory really likes Soren without any outer interference should be enough for more people to root for him :)
9/2/2013 c15 Chae2009
Hi,
My first review and I really don't want to come off as bitching but when will you be updating this story? I've been waiting so patiently... I'm really enjoying this story and want to read the rest of it. Piper and Rory are such great characters and their story makes for such a great read. Please, please update soon...
Hi,
My first review and I really don't want to come off as bitching but when will you be updating this story? I've been waiting so patiently... I'm really enjoying this story and want to read the rest of it. Piper and Rory are such great characters and their story makes for such a great read. Please, please update soon...
8/31/2013 c15 Guest
Update?
Update?
8/30/2013 c15
1rAiNwAtEr1
Fucking hell I need more. I definitely need more rory and piper, Soren can take a hike he's ruining everything grrrrrr. Piper needs to man up and claim what's his because clearly, rory needs to be shown what he really wants. And that something is piper.

Fucking hell I need more. I definitely need more rory and piper, Soren can take a hike he's ruining everything grrrrrr. Piper needs to man up and claim what's his because clearly, rory needs to be shown what he really wants. And that something is piper.