
6/3/2020 c29 Guest
Whewwwwww welcome back I am hAPPY AF
Whewwwwww welcome back I am hAPPY AF
6/3/2020 c24 A.collins
If Rory even THIIIIIIINKS about getting back together with Soren I will throw myself off a ledge! I never liked him :( poor Rory, beig chested on literally sucks, and Soren didn’t even have the magical balls to dump him via text at least.
If Rory even THIIIIIIINKS about getting back together with Soren I will throw myself off a ledge! I never liked him :( poor Rory, beig chested on literally sucks, and Soren didn’t even have the magical balls to dump him via text at least.
6/2/2020 c29 WhyWeWashTheWindows
I just reread the entire story because I didn’t remember anything but the first chapter. I’ve been reading non-stop. It’s interesting and full of twists but some things are incredibly frustrating. Like Piper sleeping with a ton of people, two of which are Rory’s friends. He should have known that would effect Rory and taken him into consideration like Rory did by telling him about Soren. He hasn’t talked to Amy or Cordi yet but I hope he doesn’t let them off the hook for not even checking with him or bothering to tell him like he did with Piper. And then Soren cheating on him when Soren told him he had been cheated on before and didn’t appreciate it... Rory’s just getting taken advantage of and disrespected and then apologizing for having a normal reaction to these betrayals. I wish he would stand up for himself some. I’m looking for forward to more chapters, I just hope Rory learns how to express what he’s feeling and demand some basic respect from Piper and his friends.
I just reread the entire story because I didn’t remember anything but the first chapter. I’ve been reading non-stop. It’s interesting and full of twists but some things are incredibly frustrating. Like Piper sleeping with a ton of people, two of which are Rory’s friends. He should have known that would effect Rory and taken him into consideration like Rory did by telling him about Soren. He hasn’t talked to Amy or Cordi yet but I hope he doesn’t let them off the hook for not even checking with him or bothering to tell him like he did with Piper. And then Soren cheating on him when Soren told him he had been cheated on before and didn’t appreciate it... Rory’s just getting taken advantage of and disrespected and then apologizing for having a normal reaction to these betrayals. I wish he would stand up for himself some. I’m looking for forward to more chapters, I just hope Rory learns how to express what he’s feeling and demand some basic respect from Piper and his friends.
6/2/2020 c29 Guest
I didn't remember this fic at all, but I re-read everything and it's good!
Can't wait to read the next chapter, hope you'll find time to finish it :)
I didn't remember this fic at all, but I re-read everything and it's good!
Can't wait to read the next chapter, hope you'll find time to finish it :)
6/2/2020 c1 Rita Yongosi
Check out my story on quotev tittle Roses and Fros ,it's dope, it's about a Nigerian girl who time travels into magical dimension with the help of a magical ring,join her has she adapts and explores her new world
Check out my story on quotev tittle Roses and Fros ,it's dope, it's about a Nigerian girl who time travels into magical dimension with the help of a magical ring,join her has she adapts and explores her new world
6/1/2020 c29
1A.C.A.Mc
Welcome back!
Hope things are well now.
Loved the new chapters. Can't wait for the rest of the story!
I am not usually a fan of first person stories, but your Rory is one of the few exceptions I've encountered. I thoroughly enjoy your style.
Wish you all the best!

Welcome back!
Hope things are well now.
Loved the new chapters. Can't wait for the rest of the story!
I am not usually a fan of first person stories, but your Rory is one of the few exceptions I've encountered. I thoroughly enjoy your style.
Wish you all the best!
7/22/2019 c20 Listen
I’ve loved this story for so long and I am happy that you have continued writing and totally understand the need for money and but...$5 for TWO chapters a MONTH? Firstly, is been years since you’ve updated and it’s a little ballsy to start asking for money with your updating history. Secondly going by that scale this story would have cost $50 by now over a period of 10 MONTHS...no way jośe. I do agree you deserve some money for your work but this ain’t it chief.
I’ve loved this story for so long and I am happy that you have continued writing and totally understand the need for money and but...$5 for TWO chapters a MONTH? Firstly, is been years since you’ve updated and it’s a little ballsy to start asking for money with your updating history. Secondly going by that scale this story would have cost $50 by now over a period of 10 MONTHS...no way jośe. I do agree you deserve some money for your work but this ain’t it chief.
7/12/2019 c19
3xoxlizzie
Urghh I wish were knew what Piper is thinking. The mystery around the dead bodies is interesting! I love this story!

Urghh I wish were knew what Piper is thinking. The mystery around the dead bodies is interesting! I love this story!
7/12/2019 c18 xoxlizzie
I'm so angry at Piper after this chapter! I know I shouldn't be but I can't believe he would be such a slut and act like it's none of Rory's business, even though it kinda is. Excited to read more!
I'm so angry at Piper after this chapter! I know I shouldn't be but I can't believe he would be such a slut and act like it's none of Rory's business, even though it kinda is. Excited to read more!
6/11/2019 c20
2pendragone96
I cannot, for the life of me, find your Patreon. I don’t know what I’m doing wrong but I tried to search your username or parts of your username and the title of the story please sos I need to read I’ll pay whatever you want sos

I cannot, for the life of me, find your Patreon. I don’t know what I’m doing wrong but I tried to search your username or parts of your username and the title of the story please sos I need to read I’ll pay whatever you want sos
6/3/2019 c20 Disappointing
I understand the financial need. It’s difficult to keep up with everything. But using this site in this manor when you haven’t even been updating this story anyways I feel is in poor taste. If you had simply opened a go fund me or something to that extent I think it would have gone over better. But 5/mo for chapters to a store that wasn’t updated in the first place. Is just abuse of the site.
I understand the financial need. It’s difficult to keep up with everything. But using this site in this manor when you haven’t even been updating this story anyways I feel is in poor taste. If you had simply opened a go fund me or something to that extent I think it would have gone over better. But 5/mo for chapters to a store that wasn’t updated in the first place. Is just abuse of the site.
6/2/2019 c20 Guest
why pay money for chapters to something that hadn’t previously been updated in years?
why pay money for chapters to something that hadn’t previously been updated in years?
6/2/2019 c20 Starlette420
I don't even remember this story. Why would I pay monthly to read something I don't remember. And would that mean there is a guaranteed 2 chapters per month every month or my money back? And would it be chapters of just this story or other things you're working on?
But on the real...im broke too. So I understand where you're coming from. That being said...I hope you understand where I'm coming from when I say...I won't be buying your patreon. I'm at that point where I'm making a bag of goldfish last me 4 days because I just paid my car payment and I don't get paid until Thursday.
Good luck to you.
I don't even remember this story. Why would I pay monthly to read something I don't remember. And would that mean there is a guaranteed 2 chapters per month every month or my money back? And would it be chapters of just this story or other things you're working on?
But on the real...im broke too. So I understand where you're coming from. That being said...I hope you understand where I'm coming from when I say...I won't be buying your patreon. I'm at that point where I'm making a bag of goldfish last me 4 days because I just paid my car payment and I don't get paid until Thursday.
Good luck to you.