for Rory Harper's Guide to Mating12/10/2009 c1 
8Annabel Wynters
OMG! I wish you went more into the whole mating part. I like this, its really funny. I can't wait for another update!
8Annabel WyntersOMG! I wish you went more into the whole mating part. I like this, its really funny. I can't wait for another update!
12/10/2009 c1 kayez
Definatly continue this. I like your main character. The supernatural elements were there but not so overpowering that they eciplsed the romance. Overall very nice.
Definatly continue this. I like your main character. The supernatural elements were there but not so overpowering that they eciplsed the romance. Overall very nice.
12/9/2009 c1 2writingright
I really like Rory's voice in this. You're writting really makes it sound like he's sitting right next to the reader telling them what had happened. Very VERY entertaining and update as soon as you can please :D
2writingrightI really like Rory's voice in this. You're writting really makes it sound like he's sitting right next to the reader telling them what had happened. Very VERY entertaining and update as soon as you can please :D
12/9/2009 c1 Domina Noctis
AWESOME! I can tell this is gonna be good, can't wait for the next chapter.
AWESOME! I can tell this is gonna be good, can't wait for the next chapter.
12/9/2009 c1 JM
Love it! I especially like that Rory didn't have the whole "Omg I slept with a guy, why did I do that I'm not gay!" freakout, because that gets old and annoying after a while.
Love it! I especially like that Rory didn't have the whole "Omg I slept with a guy, why did I do that I'm not gay!" freakout, because that gets old and annoying after a while.
12/9/2009 c1 2alwaysfaith
I like your writing style, and barely saw any typos. The only one I remember is when you put "overeating" at the start instead of "overreacting", but I don't remember seeing any others. :)
Plot-wise, it's unique. It's weird to read how the parents want them to do this, while human parents want the opposite. I can see where the parents are coming from though, with the kids being mean and stuff.
can't wait to read more!
2alwaysfaithI like your writing style, and barely saw any typos. The only one I remember is when you put "overeating" at the start instead of "overreacting", but I don't remember seeing any others. :)
Plot-wise, it's unique. It's weird to read how the parents want them to do this, while human parents want the opposite. I can see where the parents are coming from though, with the kids being mean and stuff.
can't wait to read more!
12/9/2009 c1 Serun
Must resist lure of shiny things ... must resist ... oh well, its too late now. I like your writing and how you have put a twist on the werewolf legend. I'm interested to see what else you have planned for poor Rory and Piper.
Must resist lure of shiny things ... must resist ... oh well, its too late now. I like your writing and how you have put a twist on the werewolf legend. I'm interested to see what else you have planned for poor Rory and Piper.
12/9/2009 c1 1Nezrin
Oh. Interesting. :D At first I was kinda thinking that Lucas would be his mate but Piper's good too! 8) So. What would Rory's reaction be when he finds out Piper is his mate, eh?
1NezrinOh. Interesting. :D At first I was kinda thinking that Lucas would be his mate but Piper's good too! 8) So. What would Rory's reaction be when he finds out Piper is his mate, eh?
12/8/2009 c1 25Esquirella
I love this first chapter! I'm looking forward to what you have planned for Rory and Piper.
25EsquirellaI love this first chapter! I'm looking forward to what you have planned for Rory and Piper.
12/8/2009 c1 Blackrain7557
That was hysterical...and slightly awesome. Looking forward to the next few chapters.
That was hysterical...and slightly awesome. Looking forward to the next few chapters.
12/8/2009 c1 igbriwwfweg
Oh goodness. I like this a lot. Heehee, they are SO mates, very nice. I adore werewolves. I'm so relieved this has no relation to Twilight, I can't take anymore of that. Sorry if you like that series but it is not my cup of tea. Anyway, I like your form of werewolves.
Here are some parts I particularly like.
"I knew that there were a bunch of studies and Lifetime movies that said that teenagers liked nothing better than to be as slutty as a sailor on shore leave, but not me." Haha. Best comparison ever. Man I can't seem to spell today.
“Maybe 'cause you're dressed like an extra in a gay porno?” Ohh Burnn. LOL. His friend just loves to tease him.
" A '69 Camaro, orange and black" Oh gawd yesh. Muscle cars are my love. LOVE. Ehem. Sorry.
Anyway, please please please update. I would be sad if this wasn't updated and finished. -pouts and makes a begging face-
Oh goodness. I like this a lot. Heehee, they are SO mates, very nice. I adore werewolves. I'm so relieved this has no relation to Twilight, I can't take anymore of that. Sorry if you like that series but it is not my cup of tea. Anyway, I like your form of werewolves.
Here are some parts I particularly like.
"I knew that there were a bunch of studies and Lifetime movies that said that teenagers liked nothing better than to be as slutty as a sailor on shore leave, but not me." Haha. Best comparison ever. Man I can't seem to spell today.
“Maybe 'cause you're dressed like an extra in a gay porno?” Ohh Burnn. LOL. His friend just loves to tease him.
" A '69 Camaro, orange and black" Oh gawd yesh. Muscle cars are my love. LOVE. Ehem. Sorry.
Anyway, please please please update. I would be sad if this wasn't updated and finished. -pouts and makes a begging face-