for Rory Harper's Guide to Mating2/15/2014 c16 
2Cheeky Winchester
Are you ever going to finish this in my lifetime? ...It was such a good story too...
2Cheeky WinchesterAre you ever going to finish this in my lifetime? ...It was such a good story too...
2/3/2014 c16 express
This is sooo good! I love this. You have a really good balance of keeping things interesting and making the character interactions wondering, and not overloading it with useless bs. I really hope your write more soon!
This is sooo good! I love this. You have a really good balance of keeping things interesting and making the character interactions wondering, and not overloading it with useless bs. I really hope your write more soon!
1/5/2014 c16 wonderland212
Yet another interesting chapter :)
I've probably said this before but I think the way that you're portraying the "mating" situation is really innovative. So many stories portray it as this thing that feels very overbearing and definite, whereas with this story. Rory and Piper - while they do have a strong pull towards one another esp. their wolf side - there's still this huge question mark of what will actually become of Rory and Piper. Rory still desires other people, he isn't overly smitten with Piper, and he still craves the freedom to choose his own life path which is realistic..and of course there's Piper who's struggling with his own issues which makes it difficult for him to be with Rory. You show their flaws, their weaknesses, and their uncertainty with one another and in their bond, all of which turns the typical "mate" or "fated love" story into something really fascinating.
Oh and can I just give you a slow clap for Rory's inner dialogue...and I seriously love how badass Abby and Rowan are. I do wonder how Soren will fit into all of this. I get the feeling he's going to get hurt in all of this, but I was pleasantly surprised when Rory denied the bj from Piper to be considerate of Soren...it reminded me just how nice of a guy Rory is (not that I needed that much reminding,lol). Anyways, I'll stop rambling now. :)
Yet another interesting chapter :)
I've probably said this before but I think the way that you're portraying the "mating" situation is really innovative. So many stories portray it as this thing that feels very overbearing and definite, whereas with this story. Rory and Piper - while they do have a strong pull towards one another esp. their wolf side - there's still this huge question mark of what will actually become of Rory and Piper. Rory still desires other people, he isn't overly smitten with Piper, and he still craves the freedom to choose his own life path which is realistic..and of course there's Piper who's struggling with his own issues which makes it difficult for him to be with Rory. You show their flaws, their weaknesses, and their uncertainty with one another and in their bond, all of which turns the typical "mate" or "fated love" story into something really fascinating.
Oh and can I just give you a slow clap for Rory's inner dialogue...and I seriously love how badass Abby and Rowan are. I do wonder how Soren will fit into all of this. I get the feeling he's going to get hurt in all of this, but I was pleasantly surprised when Rory denied the bj from Piper to be considerate of Soren...it reminded me just how nice of a guy Rory is (not that I needed that much reminding,lol). Anyways, I'll stop rambling now. :)
12/29/2013 c16 Guest
This is really really good! I'm assuming that its been abandoned since that last update was literally like four or five years ago but i really hope you'll post another chapter one of these days.
This is really really good! I'm assuming that its been abandoned since that last update was literally like four or five years ago but i really hope you'll post another chapter one of these days.
12/26/2013 c16 trickistokeepbreathing
Hi, i really love this story and hope you can continue it. Theres a lot of cool ideas in it and i can't wait to find out more about Rowan (who was his mate?) and Piper and what his relationship with Rory is going to be like. Also the narration is really cool and all the characters are pretty different. its soo good and i keep re-reading parts of it every so often!
Hi, i really love this story and hope you can continue it. Theres a lot of cool ideas in it and i can't wait to find out more about Rowan (who was his mate?) and Piper and what his relationship with Rory is going to be like. Also the narration is really cool and all the characters are pretty different. its soo good and i keep re-reading parts of it every so often!
12/8/2013 c16 Talysse
When Rory saw something in the bathroom, it was vampire?
I don't understand your titles, sometimes...
When Rory saw something in the bathroom, it was vampire?
I don't understand your titles, sometimes...
11/14/2013 c16 InsanityAndBeyond
Read this all in one go. Love love this story and your characters (apart from Soren. No love for him, I hope he turns out to be an evil witch involved in the killings.)
I feel like Rory whilst an absolutely hilarious character, is a bit selfish in the way he's blames a lot of stuff on Piper, and kind of dumps a lot of his anger on him for the smallest things. but anyway loving the story!
Read this all in one go. Love love this story and your characters (apart from Soren. No love for him, I hope he turns out to be an evil witch involved in the killings.)
I feel like Rory whilst an absolutely hilarious character, is a bit selfish in the way he's blames a lot of stuff on Piper, and kind of dumps a lot of his anger on him for the smallest things. but anyway loving the story!
11/10/2013 c16 SugaryWolf
Wow. I really enjoy this story and I really want to know more about Piper and Soren's relationship. I really do like Rory and Soren's relationship though. It's really cute. I can't wait to see Rory's full potential though. There's something in there and it's coming out :)
Wow. I really enjoy this story and I really want to know more about Piper and Soren's relationship. I really do like Rory and Soren's relationship though. It's really cute. I can't wait to see Rory's full potential though. There's something in there and it's coming out :)
11/10/2013 c13 Guest
cant wait for an update! i hope itll come soon. Vampires? interesting twist.
review 666 ...
cant wait for an update! i hope itll come soon. Vampires? interesting twist.
review 666 ...
11/5/2013 c16 Lunar of dreams
I love your story and honestly can't wait for your next chapter however I NEED to know.
Do piper and witch boy have a relationship?
Because of Rory's dream, I'm worried and I believe I couldn't take it , sorry to say.
I love your story and honestly can't wait for your next chapter however I NEED to know.
Do piper and witch boy have a relationship?
Because of Rory's dream, I'm worried and I believe I couldn't take it , sorry to say.
11/4/2013 c16 Jharpe
Whoa, can't believe this story will still continue. Been three years :D
Keep it up
Whoa, can't believe this story will still continue. Been three years :D
Keep it up
10/29/2013 c4 4Angel Hertz
Boy-girlfriend?! Shiz! And I thought my 'cuz asking her five year old sister about her 'mariage life' was weird. XD
Rolfing on the floor here. XD
4Angel HertzBoy-girlfriend?! Shiz! And I thought my 'cuz asking her five year old sister about her 'mariage life' was weird. XD
Rolfing on the floor here. XD
10/29/2013 c16 6TheWitch'sLover
Great update! Loved it so much! I've just spent a lovely morning procrastinating reading this and it was definitely worth it for the extra couple chapters I hadn't yet read :)
6TheWitch'sLoverGreat update! Loved it so much! I've just spent a lovely morning procrastinating reading this and it was definitely worth it for the extra couple chapters I hadn't yet read :)
10/29/2013 c15 TheWitch'sLover
Oo! I liked the update! I have to admit I love some of Piper's possessiveness x
Oo! I liked the update! I have to admit I love some of Piper's possessiveness x