for Short and Sweet5/5/2010 c5 
16Creeping Collarbones
This really strikes me as haunting. I think this is one of my favorite haikus!
Nice work!
16Creeping CollarbonesThis really strikes me as haunting. I think this is one of my favorite haikus!
Nice work!
4/29/2010 c7 14The Wilted Gardenia
Emphasises emotions and speaks a metaphorical truth, while staying "short and sweet". These would make good quotes. =)
14The Wilted GardeniaEmphasises emotions and speaks a metaphorical truth, while staying "short and sweet". These would make good quotes. =)
3/3/2010 c7 23thinking.about.thinking
That is so sad, and describes perfectly the relationship my friend has with her crush.
thinking.about.thinking
23thinking.about.thinkingThat is so sad, and describes perfectly the relationship my friend has with her crush.
thinking.about.thinking
3/3/2010 c6 thinking.about.thinking
Again, I know exactly what you mean. I love the use of "stranded."
thinking.about.thinking
Again, I know exactly what you mean. I love the use of "stranded."
thinking.about.thinking
3/3/2010 c5 thinking.about.thinking
The sadness is so poignant. I love this one.
thinking.about.thinking
The sadness is so poignant. I love this one.
thinking.about.thinking
3/3/2010 c2 thinking.about.thinking
This is so beautiful. Ths use of wording and imagery is amazing.
thinking.about.thinking
This is so beautiful. Ths use of wording and imagery is amazing.
thinking.about.thinking
3/3/2010 c1 thinking.about.thinking
Ha ha, this one is so true. This brings to mind images of laughter and childhood.
thinking.about.thinking
Ha ha, this one is so true. This brings to mind images of laughter and childhood.
thinking.about.thinking
2/14/2010 c6 81Princess-anna57
I can relate to this piece right now, I know how it feels and you've conveyed it very well here. Please keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57I can relate to this piece right now, I know how it feels and you've conveyed it very well here. Please keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^
2/6/2010 c7 5Humming LadyBug
Ooh! This last one I really really like. So well put and relateble. Definitely short and sweet ;)
5Humming LadyBugOoh! This last one I really really like. So well put and relateble. Definitely short and sweet ;)
2/5/2010 c7 Sir Scott
Witty and to the point, the way they'll suppose to be. Keep up the good work.
~SirScott
Witty and to the point, the way they'll suppose to be. Keep up the good work.
~SirScott
2/4/2010 c7 fleur de l'est
Chocolate cakes on display with tiny free samples...
..Or other stuff.. / people / :(
And I don't know if it's worse if that voice belongs to fate, tricking both the cake and the person :(
Chocolate cakes on display with tiny free samples...
..Or other stuff.. / people / :(
And I don't know if it's worse if that voice belongs to fate, tricking both the cake and the person :(