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1/9/2010 c1 XInternetsXBitchX
Your poems all seem to have a similar theme. But then a unique twist which makes them individually good. I find they are the kind of poems I can keep reading and every time something new comes out. Childish in some ways and adult in others. The perfect mix.
12/31/2009 c1 28Musical-Ink-Exchange
did not see that ending coming! luv it!
12/19/2009 c1 1Witchlight
... I'm speechless. I did not see it ending like that. It was really sweet, and then I got to the ending and I was like, "What?" :P

As always, great job!
12/13/2009 c1 37I am Lyhegnot

I was expecting something like James Bond (suspense, intruigue!), but this was awesome too!
12/13/2009 c1 33BringTheBing
I totally didnt expect the ending! But its really good... but are you trying to protray like a parent or like a boyfriend?
12/13/2009 c1 1DandylionWishes
That's sad. Good, but really sad
12/13/2009 c1 59Casino Kat
awe. this one's sad. though i really have no room to talk about stories portraying sadness. :P

very well written (:
12/13/2009 c1 82steffxnie
Wow, a great piece! Lovely writing. I kind of expected this ending, but i like the style. It's really touching.

This is wonderful, keep up the good work! :D
12/13/2009 c1 4kacysparrow
aw thats soo sad! i didnt expect that ending lol

is this about someone?

great job hun

lo0ves ya x

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